书面表达,话题写作（七） 情感表达篇,【话题点睛】话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受,常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。,典例分析,2018衢州模拟 假如你是张凯,以下是你的加拿大笔友Tony发给你的一封电子邮件,请你根据该邮件内容给Tony回复并提出你自己的观点。,要求 (1)请回复邮件中所提及的问题,可适当发挥; (2)文章中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息; (3)词数:90110。 _,【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:通过Tony向朋友抱怨父母对自己的不理解以及要求自己做一些自己不愿意做的事情,从而提出主题“怎样和父母相处?”。要注意围绕主题以及真情实感的表达。本文可从以下方面展开: (1)提出观点:肯定父母的做法并非恶意,甚至应感到是幸运的; (2)具体论述:父母要求你所做的一切源于什么目的和原因; (3)提出建议:要理解父母,并注意怎样和父母相处; (4)本文涉及提建议,注意should, can, try to do等词的使用。 2.确定时态:一般现在时 3.确定人称:第二人称,【写作架构】,【基础写作】 .写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。) 1.拥有这样的父母你很幸运。(lucky) Its for you such good parents. 2.你应该理解并且尊重你的父母。(understand) You and respect them. 3.如果你有任何问题,要和你的父母交谈并且和他们分享你的想法。(talk; share) you have any problems, just your parents and your ideas with them. 4.他们让你吃鸡蛋是为了你能有一个强壮的体魄。(make; so that) They you eat eggs you can have a body. 5.我希望你能和你的父母相处得好。(get on well with) I you can your parents.,lucky,to have,should understand,If,talk with,share,make,so that,strong,hope,get on well with,.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。) 1.They want you to work harder. They hope you can get a good job in the future. (用because改为复合句) 2.You dont want to do like this. You should have a talk with them.(改为用if 引导的复合句) 3.They dont allow me to go out alone at night. (改为被动语态) 4.Your parents are not terrible. I think. (改为宾语从句),They want you to work harder because they hope you can get a good job in the future.,If you dont want to do like this, you should have a talk with them.,I am not allowed to go out alone at night.,I dont think your parents are terrible.,【连句成文】,拓展积累,【相关短语】 thanks for 因感谢; make new friends 结交新朋友; look after/take care of 照顾; keep in touch 保持联系; be friendly to 对友好; bring back 带回 【参考谚语】 1.A smile makes you ten years younger. 笑一笑,十年少。 2.Joy and sorrow are next-door neighbors. 悲喜常相伴。 3.Laughter is the best medicine.笑是最好的药。 4.Worry kills more men than work. 忧虑比劳累更伤人。,【亮点句型】 学校的感受 1.Id like to thank you for giving me unselfish love and help. 2.You always encouraged me to study harder. 3.Although you were very strict with me, I understood what you said in the end. 4.Im so thankful to you for your kind help that Ill work harder and try to do better in the future. 家庭的感受 1.Id like to show my thanks to you for your devotion to me these years. 2.We should have good habits and try our best to take exercise every day. 3.Ill spend more time staying and communicating with you. 4.When I failed an exam and felt stressed, you were the one to encourage me.,实战演练,A 在你的生活或学习中,你认为快乐是什么?也许是拥有一位慈母、一位良师、一位挚友、一本好书、一只宠物、一个梦想珍惜眼前的快乐,快乐就在身边。请以“Happiness Around Me”为题,选取一个角度,用英语写一篇短文,以表达你的真情实感。 主要内容 (1)What is happiness in your opinion? (2)As a student, how can you get happiness? Give an example or tell a story. 要求 (1)词数: 100左右; (2)文中不得出现真实的学校名称和姓名; (3)语言力求准确,书写美观,卷面整洁。 Happiness Around Me _,One possible version: Happiness Around Me Happiness is different to different people.But it is important in our daily life.It is always around you if you put your heart into it.Most students think happiness is to get a good score; to get the love of their parents or teachers;to get well along with others and so on.As for me,happiness is helping people in need. Last Sunday, on my way home, I saw an old woman sat at the roadside.She looked very tired.I came to her and asked if she was OK.She said she had a headache and she couldnt move.I called 120 and sent her to the hospital.When I was waiting outside,her families arrived and thanked me again and again.I felt so happy that I could help someone.,B 自信赋予人力量,带给人快乐。拥有自信,人生处处是舞台,生活越来越精彩。 假如你是李华,请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的经历,并说说我们如何更加自信。 提示词语 powerful, happy, believe in, keep doing 提示问题 (1)Why is it important to be confident? (2)What experience made you more confident? (3)How can we become more confident?,要求 (1)词数:80100(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数); (2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息; (3)文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。 Its very important to be confident._ _