快乐生活读中写 心里的话说中写（Happy life, read and write）Happy life, read and writeTianjin Nankai District middle school primary school Wang ZhengangMagic warming upGrowing up, full of happiness, full of trouble, full of confusion. When your heart is happy, upset, confused. Whom would you pour out to? Why would you confide in him?_Magic wordsWriter grass once wrote in an article: write a composition, is not to speak to the book? To the composition, say what you want to say, speak clearly, speak plainly, say interesting, and youll be done.Is it easy for you to write a composition? In fact, writing a composition is so simple. Open your workbook, pick up your pen, and talk to your book about your heart. I know, the students are the most emotional heart, in everyday life, it must have produced a lot of feelings. Calm down, look at the book quietly talking, I believe your pen assignments must be full of real feelings, words must live read.Who are you going to write your heart to? Is it for parents who feed your healthy growth every day? Express your gratitude to your parents or to a teacher who carefully nurtures you every day? Express your respect for your teacher, or write to your fellow student who studies with you every day Express your gratitude for his usual help; or for a cleaner who works hard on the street every day? Express your respect for the cleaners. No matter who you write to, think in your heart: who do you want to tell your heart to most? What do you want to say to him?Once you have written it, dont forget to read what you have written to me, listen to it and revise it according to the opinions of others, so that your work will be icing on the cake.Magic drillTree, I want to say to youTianjin Nankai District middle school primary school six years Liu XiaohanTree ah, I want to say to you: spring, you spit green bud, stretching out a soft body, the spring dress very beautiful. 2Tree, I want to say to you: in the heat of summer, you send us a shade, when we comfortably in your cool, but you endure the scorching sun, hot baptism. 3Tree ah, I want to say to you: in an invigorating autumn climate season, your golden leaves fall for us on a golden carpet on the road paved, but at the cost of her own body. 4.Tree, I want to say to you: you still stand in the cold winter. The snow falls on your body, you suddenly like a blooming pear flowers, add a touch of spring as the winter snow. 5.Tree, I want to say to you: when the sandstorm hit you, you covered the dust; when the flood hit, you deeply rooted in the soil, to protect our land.Tree, youre so strong. Winter to spring breeze blowing the leaves, then the earth, you can reveal new vitality.Tree, we sincerely thank you! Thank you for your help to beautify the environment. Thank you for selflessly giving your life to mankind. You are our friend, and we must love you more. 6Tree, and want to say thank you to you! 7Magic commentaryMeipi:From the topic, we learned the content of this exercise, but also know the small author of the object.How accurate is the use of verbs such as Spitting, stretching and dressing up?.A still word contains the homage and admiration of the little writer to the tree.The use of analogy, how the image, how artistic.According to the order of spring, summer, autumn and winter, the praise of the tree was expressed.By using the method of rhetoric parallelism, enhanced the expression of momentum. The paragraph is a summary of the foregoing.The author expressed gratitude to the tree.General lot:The little writer picked up the pen in his hand, and pointed out his heart to the book in front of the book. The expression has the order, the level is very clear, the language is very graceful, the sentiment is very sincere.Each paragraph with tree at the beginning, true feelings, flowing out of the words from the bottom of my heart, but also a period of parallelism,People feel the beauty of their form and rhythm.Magic supermarketFail to live up to ones savingsSarcasm, despair, ill temperEndure and endure, rage, despair, lonelinessIn class, I was too nervous even in the heart Sweat streamed down the face., sweat.I rolled out the manuscript, thought for a moment, suddenly a stroke of the pen, wrote in the manuscript.Mother, when you are not at home, the room is empty, quiet, and even the sound of tick tock can be heard.Everyone has his own mind, of course, my heart is said to my father, but I have been unable to speak, today, finally have the opportunity to say.Magic masterpiecePay the teacher, I want to say to youTianjin Nankai District middle school primary school four years three classes Li YiPay the teacher, do you know? I have bee