高考写作讲座-议论文写作 某学校附近准备兴建一座化工厂，现征求师生的意见，师生 赞成、反对比例如图。请你以该校学生名义，以“There are other things to consider besides money” 为题，写一篇120词 左右的短文，陈述反对在此建厂的理由。 反对的理由： 1、严重污染饮用水，防范措施不充分。 2、造成严重的空气污染。 3、侵占学生游戏玩乐的场所。 同意的理由： 1、可以为本市赚钱 。 2、提供就业机会 It is reported that a new chemical works will be built here. Certainly, it is a good idea for developing economy. But on the other hand, it also causes a big problem. Firstly, many people dont agree to build this works. It will pollute the drinking water though they have promised to do something to prevent pollution. Secondly, the smoke and the soot will bring lots of illness, which is dangerous for every one. Thirdly, the chemical works will be built where we students play games and have sports after school. If built, we will have no place for fun. Because of the above reasons, we hope that the chemical works wont be built near our school. It is reported that a new chemical works will be built here. Certainly, it is a good idea for developing economy. But on the other hand, it also causes a big problem. Firstly, many people dont agree to build this works. It will pollute the drinking water though they have promised to do something to prevent pollution. Secondly, the smoke and the soot will bring lots of illness, which is dangerous for every one. Thirdly, the chemical works will be built where we students play games and have sports after school. If built, we will have no place for fun. Because of the above reasons, we hope that the chemical works wont be built near our school. 五个基本环节 Five basic steps to discuss something serious 一、开头 Starting 二、提出观点 Giving ideas 三、强化论点 Developing 四、提出反驳 Arguing 五、得出结论 Coming to a conclusion StartingStarting the passagethe passage 1 1 、state a factstate a fact Once again university graduates start a new round of job hunting. Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. 2 2 、ask a questionask a question Right is right. Right? But is left wrong? (Is Left Wrong?) Body of the passage Body of the passage (1) Giving ideas 1 1 、common knowledgecommon knowledge： It is known to all that smoking is harmful to our health. 2 2、direct opiniondirect opinion： I think it is useful to build a new dam across the river. We believe that doing exercises every day will do us a lot of good. 3 3 、idiomsidioms： “Where there is a will, there is a way.” It is the same in learning English. Body of the passage (2). Developing your viewpoint logically 1、First,Second,ThirdFinally 2、Firstly,Secondly,ThirdlyFinally 3、First of all,Then,Next,At last 4、Furthermore;Besides;Moreover 5、Whats more,;At the same time,; What is worse, 3).Disproval of the viewpoint（Arguing） 1、but, yet, still; however; although 2、on the other hand; on the contrary; in spite of; even though; At the same time 3、60 percent of the students thinkand about 10 percent give no idea, while the rest of the students are strongly against the suggestion. Body of the passage Coming to a conclusionComing to a conclusion 1. Finally;Therefore 2. In a word;In short;In the end; In other words;As a result;In all 3. Generally speaking 4. As I have shown; As has been stated; As we (you) all know 某学校附近准备兴建一座化工厂，现征求师生的意见，师生赞成、 反对比例如图。请你以该校学生名义，以“There are other things to consider besides money” 为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，陈述反 对在此建厂的理由。 反对的理由： 1、严重污染饮用水，防范措施不充分。 2、造成严重的空气污染。 3、侵占学生游戏玩乐的场所。 同意的理由： 1、可以为本市赚钱 。 2、提供就业机会 The majority of the students and teachers in our school, including me, are against the construction of a chemical works near our school though the rest 10% do agree to the plan. They hold the view that the works will make lots of money for our city and provide new jobs for the local people, but we think it will do us more harm than good. First, the drinking water will be badly polluted even if some measures will be taken. On the other hand, the air over the city will be polluted too. Worse still, the site of the chemical works has been the only place where we students play games and have sports after school. Where would we go if it were occupied? In a word, we hope the factory wont be built here. The majority of the students and teachers in our school, including me, are against the construction of a chemical works near our school though the rest 10% do agree to the plan. They hold the view that the works will make lots of money for our city and provide new jobs for the local people, but we think it will do us more harm than good. First, the drinking water will be badly polluted even if some measures will be taken. On the other hand, the air over the city will be polluted too. Worse still, the site of the chemical works has been the only place where we students play games and have sports after school. Where would we go if it were occupied? In a word, we hope the factory wont be built here.