Writing PaidHoliday Somemistakes Canwerelaxwell Thekeytotheproblemmustbeno Canwerelaxwell Theanswer tothequestion issurelyno Anexampleforimprovement Whensomepeopleaskedme Whatwouldyoudowhenitwouldbepaidholidayandhowdoyouthoughtaboutit Icouldn treplyitclearly Asyousee Ithinkit swonderfultohavepaidholiday Ontheotherhand withoutworkingthenyougetmoney Wemaycausebadhabbit Paidholidaybecomepopulardaybyday Butitisalsoadream Weneedtoworkhardtomakeitcometrue Therestisabouthowgooditisifpaidholidaycomestrue Revised Whensomepeopleaskedme Whatwouldyoudowhenitwouldbepaidholidayandhowdoyouthoughtaboutit Icouldn treplyitclearly Whenpeopleaskedme Whatwouldyoudowhentherewouldbepaidholidayandwhatdoyouthinkaboutit Icouldn treplytoitclearly WhenaskedwhatIthinkifwehavepaidholiday Ifindithardtoanswer Tocorrectgrammaticalmistakes Asyousee Ithinkit swonderfultohavepaidholiday Ontheotherhand withoutworkingthenyougetmoney Wemaycausebadhabbit Paidholidaybecomepopulardaybyday Butitisalsoadream Weneedtoworkhardtomakeitcometrue Ithinkit swonderfultohavepaidholiday butifwegetmoneywithoutworking wemayformbadhabit Paidholidaybecomespopulardaybyday butitisstilladreamtomostChinesepeople Therefore weneedtoworkhardtomakeitcometrue Abetterversion Ithinkit swonderfultohavepaidholiday butifwegetmoneywithoutworking wemayformbadhabit However somepeoplesayjustbecauseourbossgenerouslypaysuswhenweenjoyourholiday wefeelgratefulandwhenwecomebacktowork wewillworkharderandbetter Sopaidholidayshouldbeencouraged Asamatteroffact paidholidaybecomespopulardaybyday butitisstilladreamtomostChinesepeople Therefore weneedtoworkhardtomakeitcometrue Fullyrevised I WhenaskedwhatIthinkifwehavepaidholiday Ifindithardtoanswer Ithinkit swonderfultohavepaidholiday butifwegetmoneywithoutworking wemayformbadhabit However somepeoplesayjustbecauseourbossgenerouslypaysuswhenweenjoyourholiday wefeelgratefulandwhenwecomebacktowork wewillworkharderandbetter Sopaidholidayshouldbeencouraged Asamatteroffact paidholidaybecomespopulardaybyday butitisstilladreamtomostChinesepeople Therefore weneedtoworkhardtomakeitcometrue Fullyrevised II It swonderfultohavepaidholiday Asamatteroffact paidholidaybecomespopulardaybyday butitisstilladreamtomostChinesepeople Therefore weneedtoworkhardtomakeitcometrue dependingonhowyouaregoingtowritetherest Goodexpressions Somepeoplebelievethatthepaidvacationcanimprovethecurrenttourismpattern Forexample itcanrelievethepressureoftraffic accommodation shoppingmallsandsoon Besides itisbeneficialtothesustainabledevelopmentoftourism Themostimportantisthatthepaidholidaycanmakepeopleenjoyfreedomandcanraisetheenthusiasmoftheworkers 任耀明 PaidHoliday goodexample 152words Adaptedfrom左琪 s PaidholidayoriginatedfromFranceinthe1930s Todayithasbeenwidelyacceptedandestablishedbymanycountries In2008 Chinaissuedpaidholidaypolicyafteralong termstudyandstruggle Therighttorestisbasicforushumans Workers righttorestisoneofthewaystokeepandincreasetheprofitsofcompanies Apaidholidaywillimprovetheworker senthusiasmtoworkharder Paidholidayisalsogoodfortourism Currently workerscanonlyhavetheirholidayatfixedtimewhentherearemanypeopleouttraveling Ifwepracticepaidholiday workerscanplantheirholidayflexiblysothepressureoftourismespeciallyinthegoldenweekwillberelievedandthequalityofservicecanalsobeimproved However todaythepaidholidaysystemisstillnotwellestablishedinChina sowemustcontinueourstruggletilleverybodycantrulyfeelitsbenefit Otherwaystoreason Companiescannotaffordtogivetheiremployeespaidholidaybecausetheirprofitsarelow Employeesfeelluckytohaveajobconsideringtoday sfiercecompetitioninthejobmarket Theywon tbargainwiththeirbossforapaidholidaytolosetheirjob Manypeopleespeciallylargenumbersofmigrantworkershavetoworkatweekends Itseemstheyneverneedaholiday nottomentionapaidholiday Paidholidayisnotnecessarilygoodbecauseonecanflexiblyplanhisholiday butthenhehastoenjoyhisvacationalone otherwisehemustfirstmakegoodarrangementswithhisfamilyorfriendssothattheycanalltaketheholidayatthesametimeanddothingstogether Wishesorsolutions Governmentcangiveallowancetocompaniestoencouragethepracticeofpaidholiday Governmentsshouldissuemoredetailedrulesofpaidholidayandthereshouldbepunishmentsforcompanieswhichignoretherules Paidholidaytogetherwithgoldenweekiswhatweshouldlongfor Theend 知识回顾KnowledgeReview