1 rear ending追尾 runofftheroad crashintotree crashintohouse turnover Trafficaccidentsaredangerous 2 Reasons SpeedingTireddrivingDrunkdrivingCarelessdrivingUsingcellphoneswhiledriving 3 Topic Usingcellphoneswhiledriving 1 It sadangerousdistractiontodrivers 2 Itshouldbeforbidden Para2 Argument 论点 1 Para3 Argument 论点 2 Para4 Suggestion Para5 Conclusion Tip1 Structureisaguidetofindthemainpoints Para1 Viewpoint 观点 4 Para1Cellphonesareusedeverywhere butontheroadtheyareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden afact aviewpoint Para1 Viewpoint Tip2 Theviewpointofanargumentativewriting 议论文 shouldbeincludedinasummary 5 Point1 Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden Mainpointsofthesummary 6 1 Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodrivers Para2 Argument 论据 1 usinga notusinga onthephone ontheroad unpredictable careful It sdangerous It ssafe Driversusingaphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusing Drivers Attention Driving Result Support 7 Point1 Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden Point2 Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone Mainpointsofthesummary 8 Para3 Argument 论据 2 2 Cellphonesusedontheroadshouldbeforbidden atleast1 000deathsperyear againstthelawandstrictlyenforced lawsareneedtoforbidtheuseofcellphonesincars Anexample phonesusedbydrivers drunkdriving Similarly Support 9 Point1 Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden Point2 Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone Mainpointsofthesummary Point3 Justlikedrunkdriving Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars 10 Q1 Beforeusingacellphone whatquestionshoulddriversaskthemselves Para4 Suggestion Suggestion1 Suggestion2 Isthiscallreallythatimportant Yes No Driversneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones Useaphonewisely Notuseaphone Support 11 Point1 Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden Point2 Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone Mainpointsofthesummary Point3 Justlikedrunkdriving Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars Point4 Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones 12 Para5Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies butdriversneedtousethemwisely AsprofessionalracerJohnAndrettisays Drivingsafelyisyourfirstresponsibility Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive Para5 Conclusion aquote 引语 Tip3 Aquoteisusuallyusedtosupportanideaandshouldbenotincludedinasummary 13 Point1 Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden Point2 Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone Mainpointsofthesummary Point3 Justlikedrunkdriving Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars Point4 Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones Point5 Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies butdriversneedtousethemwisely Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive 14 1 Cellphonesusedontheroaddangerouslydistractthedriversandshouldbebanned Skills 1 词性转换法2 近义替换法3 正话反说法4 语态互换法5 句式变化法 Skillsofrestatement 重述 Point1 asanexample Point1 Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversand shouldbeforbidden 2 Usingcellphoneswhiledrivingdangerouslydrawawaydrivers attentionandshouldnotbeallowed 3 Weshouldforbidusingcellphonesontheroadfortheirharmfuldistractiontodrivers 4 Driversshouldbepreventedfromusingcellphoneswhiledrivingbecausetheycanbedangerouslydistracted 并列句 复合句 简单句 6 主语变身法 15 Haveatry workingroupsof4tocreateagoodsummary Point1 Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden Point2 Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone Point3 Justlikedrunkdriving Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars Point4 Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones Point5 Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies butdriversneedtousethemwisely Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive 16 2 Nodetailsin40 80words 1 Coverthemainpointsusingyourownwords 4 Nogrammaticalmistakes 5 Nopersonalopinion 3 Usetransitionalwordsifpossible Learntousethechecklist 4C 1O 17 Usingcellphoneswhiledrivingcandistractthedriversandshouldbebaned Drivershaveahigherrateofaccidentswhenusephones Accidentsaredanger whichincluderunningoffaroadandcrashingintotrees fences Justlikedrunkdriving lawsareneededtorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars Driversshouldusephoneswithgreaterresponsibilityforsafe Inconclusion cellphonesareimportantinemergenciesandshouldbeusedwisely Afterall weonlyhaveonelifeatall 89words copyoriginalwords Toensuresafedriving drivershadbetternotusethem unnecessarydetails nopersonalidea Beforelawsarepassed Revisetheversionwrittenbyoneofmystudents 18 Usingcellphoneswhiledrivingdistractsdriversandshouldbebanned Drivershaveahigherrateofaccidentswhenusingphones Justlikedrunkdriving lawsareneededtoforbiddriversfromtal