广西凤山县 2016 高考英语短文改错 二轮 专练 8 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共有10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均限一词 2 只允许修改10 处 多者 从第11 处起 不计分 Once when I was a teenager my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus Finally there was only one family among us and the ticket counter This family made deep impression on me There were eight children both probably under the age of twelve You could tell they didn t have a lot of money Their clothes was not expensive and they were clean The children were well behaved all of us standing in line two by two behind their parents held hands They were excitedly talking about the clowns elephants and another performances where that they would see that night Everyone could sense they have never been to the circus before 参考答案 4 Once when I was a teenager my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus Finally there was only one family among us and the ticket counter between This family made deep impression on me There were eight children both probably a all under the age of twelv e You could tell they didn t have a lot of money Their clothes was not were expensive and they were clean The children were well behaved all of us standing in line but them two by two behind their parents held hands They were excitedly talking about the clowns holding elephants and another performances where that they would see that night Everyone could other 删除 where sense they have never been to the circus before had 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共有10 处语言错误 每句中最多两处 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在此处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出修改的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在其下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改10 处 多者 从11 处起 不计分 We all have a strong desire to succeed For some the desire is great than that of the average people In fact everyone wants to be successful so very few are willing to pay the price of hard working Success is an attitude and has no really secrets It all start with your belief system Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself You must at first believe in yourself On your journey to succeed you will find that there are no shortcuts You will never be able to completely master every detail of your life Attempt to do so will only lead to disappointment Besides it s necessary of you to have clear goals You d better put your goals on paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progress 参考答案 5 We all have a strong desire to succeed For some the desire is great than that of the greater average people In fact everyone wants to be successful so very few are willing to pay the but price of hard working Success is an attitude and has no really secrets It all start with your work real starts belief system Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself You must at first how believe in yourself On your journey to succeed you will find that there are no shortcuts success You will never be able to completely master every detail of your life Attempt to do so will Attempting only lead to disappointment Besides it s necessary of you to have clear goals You d better for put your goals on paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your down 或 down progress 短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共 有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改10 处 多者 从第11 处起 不记分 One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend a truck came to a stop besides us The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through I stood there and couldn t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful The man insisted so I grateful accepted the offer thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road This man might need the umbrella himself and he preferred to give it to everyone else It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return 参考答案 6 One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend a truck came to a stop friends besides us The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found beside an we were wet through I stood there and couldn t believe in that a complete stranger is 去掉 was so thoughtful The man insisted so I grateful accepted the offer thanked him and watched gratefully the truck disappear down the road This man might need the umbrella himself and he but preferred to give it to everyone else It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without someone to expect anything in return expecting 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 5 分 满分 15 分 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 对标有题号的每一行作出判断 如无错误 在该行右 边横线上画一个勾 如有错误 每行只有一个错误 则按下列情况改正 此行多一个词 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 在该行右边横线上写出该词 并也用斜线划掉 此行缺一个词 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 此行错一个词 在错的词下划一横线 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意 原行没有错的不要改 Although all the students seem very happily at our school as 66 far as we concerned the buildings would be more beautiful 67 if the schoo