WritingTraining ProducedbyLiZhongying 假如你是李华 你的美国朋友Alice听说中国的中小学正在实施素质教育 来信询问有关情况 请你根据下表提供的信息 写封回信 谈一谈 素质教育 实施后你们学校生活发生的变化 注意 1 写信日期为2004年2月20日 2 词数 100左右 3 注意书信格式 DearAlice Yousaidthatyouwantedtoknowsomethingaboutquality orientededucation SoIwilltalkaboutquality orientedandexam orientededucation Atlast weonlycouldlistenourteachersandmakenotes Afterclasseswehadalothomeworkstodo Ittookusmuchtimeonitatnight Butnow inclass wecandiscussquestionswithteacher Studentsareallliketostudy Sometimewealsocouldplayateacher Wedon thavesomanyhomeworks Sowehaveenoughtimetodoallkindsofactivities forexample singing playingballs Englishconer andsoon Atnight wecanseenews doexperiments Yours LiHua2004 2 20 Incorrectletterform Spellingmistakes Grammaticalmistakes Thepassageiswordy ThinkinChineseandwriteinChinglish Noeffectiveconjunctions Commonproblems DearAlice Yours Feb20 2004 LiHua Incorrectletterform Spellingmistakes Ourschoollifewasquiteboiling Weonlymadenoticesandlessonedinclass Alotofactiviststaketheplaceofthehomework Butnowthingsaredifficultfromit Wedoexperiencesanddiscussionthesubjects boring notes listened activities different experiments discuss Inclass exam orientededucationmadeustolistentheteachersandmakenotesComparingwiththat quality orientededucationallowsuslearnlively Wejusthadtoomanyhomeworkstodo Severalyearsago wehavesawandexperiencedtheexam orientededucation Grammaticalmistakes Compared tolearnactively muchhomework Thepassageiswordy Ireceivedyourlastletteryesterday Iampleasedtoreceiveit YousaidyouheardthatChinaiscarryingoutthequality orientededucationinprimaryschoolsandmiddleschoolsandyouwantedtoknowsomethingaboutit SoIwilltellyousomethingaboutitandtheexam orientededucation 50words Gladtohearfromyou Youwanttoknowsomethingaboutthequality orientededucationinChina I dliketotellyousomethingaboutthechangesinmyschool 27words WriteinChinglish Intheevening weseenews doexperimentsanddiscussingsubjects whichinsteadofcontinuedoinghomework Ontopofthat wenotonlyhappierthanago wecanlearnbetterandmorenow Intheevening insteadofcontinuingourexercisesfarintothenightwecanwatchnewsonTV doexperimentsanddiscussoursubjects Ina oneword wearenotonlyhappierthanbefore butwecanlearnbetterandmorenow Noeffectiveconjunctions Andwedidourhomeworkinourfreetime Wedidhomeworktillmidnight Wehavealotofactivities dancing computers English andsoon Andwehadtodoourhomeworkexercisesbothinourfreetimeandevenfarintothenight Afterclass Wehavevariousoutsideactivities suchassinging dancing Englishcorner andtakingcomputerlessons Feb20 2004DearAlice Hownicetohearfromyou YouwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina Now Iwilltellyouaboutit Inthepast exam orientededucationforcedustolistentoourteacherwhiletakingnotesinclass Afterclass wedidallkindsofexerciseswithoutend Aftersupper wehadtocontinueourexercisesfarintothenight Now quality orientededucationhasmadeourschoollifecolorful Weareactiveinclass Inordertotraintheability weoftendoresearchonstudy Sometimesoneofusteachesourselves Wehavevariousoutsideactivities suchassinging dancing Englishcorner andtakingcomputerlessons Basketballandfootballareourfavoritesports IntheeveningwecanwatchnewsonTV doexperimentsbyourselvesandhavetalksanddiscussionsofoursubjects It scertainthatourschoollifeisgettingmoreandmorecolorfulandinteresting Bestwishes Yours LiHua Properletterform Noobviousmistakes Writeinlogicalorder Useexactadjectives goodverbsandproperphrases Usesomeeffectiveconjunctions Usedifferentsentencestructures Whydosayitisagoodarticle Readthefollowingsentencesanddecidewhichisbetter 1 I mwaitingforyoutocome I mlookingforwardtoyourarrival 2 Tomisill Hecannotstudy Hestillattendsschool Tomisillandcannotstudy yethestillattends 3 Ireadthenewspaperinthepast IliketowatchTVnow Iusedtoreadthenewspapers butnowIprefertowatchTV 4 Hecameandbroughtusalotofnewstories Hecamewithalotofnewstories Improvethefollowingsentences 1 Theflathasanareaof25squaremetresandthereisabedroom abathroom andakitchen 3 Nextthetextwillbegonethroughbyusandthenthemainideawillbefound 4 Hesawtheboyinthestreet Hestoppedtospeaktohim Hegavehimapenny 2 IheardyouarelearningChinese Iamverygladtohearthat I mverygladtohearthatyouarelearning Let sgothroughthetextandfindthemainidea Seeingtheboyinthestreet hestoppedtospeaktohimandgavehimapenny Feb20 2004DearAlice Thankyouforyourlastletter Youaskedmewhatquality orientededucationbroughttous NowI lltellyouaboutit Insteadofjustlisteningtotheteacherandtakingnotes wenowexperienceamoreactiveatmosphereinclass Weoftendoresearchtodevelopourabilityandsometimeswecanevenactasateachertoteachothers Afterclass weusedtospendallthetimetryingtofinishthehomework Butnow thereareallkindsofactivitiesforus suchassinging dancing ballgamesandcomputerstudying WeoftengototheEnglishcornertopractiseourEnglish Intheevening thehomeworkexercisesonceforcedustostudytillmidnight Yetnow wecanwatchnewsonTV doexperimentsbyourselvesandhavediscussionsofoursubjects Self improvementcomeswiththenewwayofstudy Wereallybenefitalotfromit Whataboutyourschoollife Bestwishes Y