浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（4）第一节：短文改错（满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend / weekend with you. Luckily I was the amcompletely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday evening. onDear Jim,Thank you for your last letter telling me your recently news. Id like to tell you something about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.20, which was a fine day. There were over 1,600 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finishes the race in 11.2 seconds and broke down the school record. They were all very excited. The sports meet was great success. That was why we were all making every effort to our class honor. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of what we had done.Looking forward to receiving your letter.Yours,Li Ping第二节 书面表达 (满分30分)近些年来，一些中学把电子设备iPad引进了课堂，用iPad下载教材代替传统教材，并辅助教学活动。请您根据以下要点给自己的英文博客写一篇文章，谈谈你周围同学对此现象的看法，并发表自己的看法和理由。同学看法1节约纸张；有利环保；方便高效同学看法2价格昂贵；容易使人沉迷于电子游戏你的看法和理由注意：词数100-120左右；文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。In some middle schools, iPads are introduced into classrooms to replace traditional textbooks and assist teachers as well as students in teaching and learning. 第一节：短文改错（满分10分）recently改recent holding改held;attend改attending; finishes改finished;去掉down;They改We;great前加a;why改because;to改forwinner改 winners第二节 书面表达 (满分30分)In some middle schools, iPads are introduced into classrooms to replace traditional textbooks and assist teachers as well as students in teaching and learning. For us students, we have different opinions toward this phenomenon. Some of us hold the view that its a better way to save paper, which definitely does good to environment protection. Moreover, using iPads brings us efficiency and convenience. However, others tend to believe that iPad costs so much money that not everyone can afford it. Besides, if we spend large quantities of time playing games on it, there is a high risk of being addicted to it, which of course will have bad impact on study.As for me, Im in favor of using iPad for we can search for abundant information which cant be found in traditional textbooks. Of course, every bean has its black. Therefore, its a matter of how we can use it properly, not whether we should use it. 3用心 爱心 专心