CoherenceandCohesion 1 写作强化教程P11 2 写作强化教程P11 3 写作强化教程P12 4 写作强化教程P12 5 写作强化教程P12 6 实现CC的语法现象 代词 Pronoun Manystudentsattendpublicschools Theyfaceenormouspressureunderthepresentpubliceducationsystem 同位语 apposition China anancientcountryofcivilization hasexperiencedrapideconomicgrowthrecently 总结词 this thesesummaryword Recentyearswitnessarapidgrowthininternetusers Thistrendisexpectedtocontinue 并列连词 coordinatingconjunction and or but so Manypeopleretireattheageof65 butsomewouldliketocontinuetoworkfortheiremployers 从属连词 subordinatingconjunction because since although when if Althoughpriceisanimportantfactorinfluencingconsumerbehavior therearestillmanyotherfactorsatwork 关系代词 relativepronouns定语从句 Manypeoplefailtostrikeabalancebetweenworkandlife whichcausesenormouspressure 句子连接副词 短语 sentencelinkers therefore however furthermore incomparison Mostpeopleretireattheageof65 However stillsomewouldliketocontinuetoworkfortheiremployers 7 Manypeopleenjoyretirement Manypeoplefindtheyhavethetimeforactivitiestheyenjoy Manypeopleenjoyretirement Theyfindtheyhavetimeforactivitiestheyenjoy Overthelasttwodecades populationageinghasacceleratedintheUK Populationageingisacommontrendthroughoutthedevelopedworld Overthelasttwodecades populationageing acommontrendthroughoutthedevelopedworld hasacceleratedintheUK Thepopulationinurbanareashasgrownparticularlyquickly Thepopulationgrowthinurbanareashasputpressureonlocalservices Thepopulationinurbanareashasgrowthparticularlyquickly Thistrendhasputpressureonlocalservices 8 Therearemorejobopportunitiesincities Peoplemigratetocitiesfromruralareas Peoplemigratefromruralareastocitieswheretherearemorejobopportunities Couplesareunderpressuretowork Coupleoftendelaystartingafamily Ascouplesareunderpressuretowork theyoftendelaystartingafamily Lowermortalityisduetoincreasedlongevity Increasedlongevityresultsfromimprovedhealthcare Lowermortalityisduetoincreasedlongevity whichresultsfromimprovedhealthcare Peoplewanttoenjoyretirement Peopledonotalwayssaveenoughforacomfortableretirement Peoplewanttoenjoyretirement However theydonotalwayssaveenoughforacomfortableretirement 9 Itisexpectedthattherewillbeahigherproportionofolderpeoplethanyoungpeopleinmanycountriesinthefuture Doyouthinkitisapositiveornegativedevelopment 10 12 03 10Itisexpectedthattherewillbeahigherproportionofolderpeoplethanyoungpeopleinmanycountriesinthefuture Doyouthinkitisapositiveornegativedevelopment Positive 1 Riseofrelevantindustry healthcareindustryandretirementrealestate 2 childcareNegative NationalincomeBurdenonpublichealthcareresource 11 12 03 10Itisexpectedthattherewillbeahigherproportionofolderpeoplethanyoungpeopleinmanycountriesinthefuture Doyouthinkitisapositiveornegativedevelopment Positive Riseofrelevantindustry healthcareindustryandretirementrealestate 2 childcareNegative NationalincomeBurdenonpublichealthcareresource TheelderlyTheseniorPensionerRetireeOldergenerationAgeingpopulationAgeingsocietyDemographicrealityDemographictrendDemographicphenomenon 12 Introduction Duetotheimprovedlivingstandardanddecreasedbirthrateinmanycountries theproportionofelderlypeoplekeepsrising Thistrendisnotrestrictedtodevelopedcountrieswhichboastwell establishedsupportingsystemsforelderlypeople butisalsoevidentamongsomedevelopingcountrieswhoseinfrastructurefallsbehindthegrowthofagedpopulation Inmyopinion moreproblemsthanbenefitswillsurfacewiththistrend Lead in 因为 不仅发达国家 还发展中国家 Populationageinghasemergedasaglobalphenomenoninthewakeofthenowvirtuallyuniversaldeclineinfertilityandincreasesinlifeexpectancy Notonlydevelopingcountriesbutalsodevelopedonesareconfrontedwiththisnewdemographicreality 13 Paragraph2 Admittedly olderpeopleoftenhavetimetoofferforthebenefitoffamilyandthecommunity Nowadays theyoungtendtorelyontheoldergenerationforhouseholdchores Itisalsoreportedthattimedevotedtovoluntaryworkandcareisatitsheightwithintheagegroupsover55 Suchdevotionaddsgreatlytothecommunitywell being ifnottotheGDP 总结句 社区幸福感 虽然非GDP贡献 14 Paragraph3 Populationageing however bringsaboutseriouseconomicandsocialproblems Whenthenumberofworkersdecreases thenationalincomegoesdown Atthesametime asaperson suseofhealthservicesincreasessignificantlyinthelateryearsoftheirlife anageingpopulationmaybringaboutsignificantburdenonpublichealthcaresystem Moreover withanageingpopulation theproblemsassociatedwiththe sandwichgeneration peoplewhohavebothchildrenandparentstolookafter havegainedincreasingprominence Membersofthis in between generationareoftentornbetweentheneedsofraisingchildren caringforageingparentsandjobresponsibilities HealthcareresourceBurdenonpublichealthcaresystem Sandwich in betweengeneration 同位语Children ageingparents job 15 Conclusion Tosumup populationageingisaninevitableprospect thenegativeeffectsofwhichoutweighthepositive Asageingisanormalpartoflifecycleforhumanbeings wemustrecognizeitschallengestoourlifeandsociety andworkoneffectivestrategiestominimizeitsadverseinfluences 16 P1 P2 P3 P4 Lead inOpinionsMyopinion TopicsentenceSupportingideas examples TopicsentenceSupporti