PartI Para 1 3 AllfamilymemberstookgoodcareofJimmy PartII Para IlookedafterJimmyaloneafterparents death 4 7 PartIII Para Jimmy s57thbirthdaywasasuccess PartIV Para 12 Conclusion Lovewithoutlimitations 8 11 TextStudy StructureAnalysis Text TextstructureanalysisThepassageisafirstpersonnarrationwhichcentersonthemaintheme lovewithoutlimitations Thedominantstructureofthepassageis problem response measure evaluation Withherlifetimeexperience theauthortellsustherehaveneverbeenanylimitationstolovewhateverlifemaypresent Thewritingmethodofthistextis StructureAnalysis Problem Response Evaluation TextStudy StructureAnalysis Textstructureanalysis Mainideaofthepassage Lovewithoutlimitations Problem1 Para 1 Problem2 Paras 4 5 Problem3 Para 8 Responses Paras 1 2 Responses Para 6 Responses Paras 8 10 Evaluation Para 3 Evaluation Para 7 Evaluation Para 11 Paras 1 3 Paras 4 7 Paras 8 11 Conclusion para 12 Lead in Whatis love likeinyourmind Useonewordoronethingtodescribe love Andwhyisthat Understanding Loveisasongwithoutwords Onemustfeelitwithhissoul Loveisanendlesspath Onemustwalkonthroughhislife Jimmy wasbornwithbraindamageduetoalackofoxygenathisbirth MymothertaughtJimmypracticalthings MyliferevolvedaroundJimmy s Myfatherheldthefamilytogetherwithhispatienceandunderstanding IprotectedJimmywhenthekidspickedonhim MyfatherandJimmywereinseparableanddideverythingtogether Problem Response Evaluation Part1oftheText Sb Sth donot dosth leavingsb sth with consequence 某人 物 不 做 导致了 后果 Para 1 用于记述 某人 物 不 作为的后果 2008年5月12日下午 汶川发生了里氏8 0级地震 导致该地区成为一片废墟 OntheafternoonofMay12th 2008 anearthquake withamagnitudeof8 0ontheRichterscale brokeoutinWenchuan leavingtheregionwithruins trackdown findsb orsth afteralongsearch追踪到 追查到Allcitizensshouldhelpthepoliceintrackingdowncriminals 所有市民都应该帮助警察追查罪犯 pickontreatsb badlyorunfairly找茬 欺负Whyareyoualwayspickingonme 你为什么老是和我过不去 Somechildrenpickedonmybrotherwhosuffersfrombraindamage 我弟弟患有脑病 常被一些孩子欺负 现在进行时现在进行时的基本用法 A 表示现在 指说话人说话时 正在发生的事情 Wearewaitingforyou B 习惯进行 表示长期的或重复性的动作 说话时动作未必正在进行 Mr Greeniswritinganothernovel 说话时并未在写 只处于写作的状态 Sheislearningpiano C 表示渐变的动词有 get grow become turn run go begin等 Theleavesareturningred It sgettingwarmerandwarmer D 与always constantly forever等词连用 表示反复发生的动作或持续存在的状态 往往带有说话人的主观色彩 Youarealwayschangingyourmind E 现在进行时可表示根据现在的计划或安排 最近将要发生的动作 有些表示位置移动的动词 如go come leave arrive reach move stay等 可用现在进行时表示将来 I vewonatwo dayholidaytoBeijing Iamtakingmydearmother telloninformagainstsb 告发Underthepressurefromthepolice thewifeofthekillerfinallytoldonherhusband 在警方的压力之下 杀人犯的妻子最后供出了丈夫 Parttwo paras 4 7 1 Problem paras 4 5 Father sdeathmadeJimmyawreck MymotherdiedsixmonthslaterandIwaslefttolookafterJimmy 2 Responses para 6 IhelpedJimmyadjusttoalifewithoutourfatherandmother 3 Evaluation para 7 Itwaspossibletohaveahomewithroomforbothhislimitationsandmyambitions AndcaringforsomeonelikeJimmyhadenrichedmylife Usually adj p p sb sth now 通常 某人 物 现在却 用于强调 人 物的今昔反差 通常 这个地方以风景优美而著称 现在却是一片废墟 无论想象力多么丰富都不能再现其昔日的景色 Usuallyfamousforitsscenicbeauty theplacenowlayinruinsandnoamountofimaginationcouldrestoreitspastlandscape Ihiredsomeonetolivewithhimanddrivehimtowork butnomatterhowmuchItriedtomakethingsstaythesame evenJimmygraspedthattheworldhe dknownwasgone L20 Nomatter how who what where etc however whoever whatever wherever staythesame keepthingsastheywere grasp understand adjustto 适应 许多地震导致的孤儿尚未适应没有亲生父母呵护的生活 Manyoftheearthquake madeorphanshaven tadjustedyettolivingwithoutgoodcarefromtheirbiologicalparents Infact doingsth forsb who asmuchassb elsedohasbenefitedthedoermorethananythingelseevercouldhave 事实上 为像 一样 的人做某事 更有益于做事者本人 其他任何东西都不能与之相比 用于表述 为某人做事在做事者身上产生的良性效应 事实上 对像那里的人那样坚强并对我们懂得感激的灾民施救 更净化了我们的心灵 其他任何东西都不能与之相比 Infact effectingtherescueofthevictimswhoremainasfirmandknowtoappreciateoureffortsasmuchasthepeopletheredohascleansedoursoulsmorethananythingelseevercouldhave Partthree paras 8 11 1 problem para 8 IhadapartyforJimmy sbirthdaybutnoneofourfamilycouldjoinusbecauseofthedifficultytravelinginatimeofnationaldisaster 2 Responses paras 8 10 a Icalledonmyfaithfulfriendstohelpmakeitamerryandfestiveoccasion b MyfriendsbroughttheidealpresentsforJimmy c ThedetailsofJimmy sactiveperformanceatthepartywasdescribed 3 Evalutaion para 11 Attheparty insteadofmakingJimmyhappy wewereencouragedandpleasedbyJimmy reckonwithconsidersth whenmakingplans考虑 面对 对付Ifyoutreatherbadlyyouwillhaveherfamilytoreckonwith 如果你对她不好 她家里人就要来对付你 callon uponasksb todosth 要求 某人做某事 ItwasthenthatIfeltcalledupontoreplytothespeech 就在那时 我感到我得回应那次讲话 SomepeoplecallonGodtohelpthem somesimplyrelyonthemselves 有的人请求上帝来帮助自己 有的却自帮自助 leaduptocomebeforesth important andoftencauseit作为 的先导 引起IntheweeksleadinguptograduationIdidverylittle 在毕业前的几周里 我几乎无所事事 endupdoingsth cometobeinaparticularsituationorstate esp whenyoudidnotplanit以 结束Becareful youcouldendupgettinghurt 小心 不要最后把自己给弄伤了 Wheneverwegoouttodinnerwiththem Ialwaysenduppayingthebill 我们每次外出和他们吃饭 最后总是我埋单 IalonewaslefttolookafterJimmy Inseparablewithfather Jimmydideverythingwithhim Withidealgifts myfriendsmadeJimmy sb