姐：帮我看下这篇万能作文怎么样，我是根据很多模板拼起来的，看下是否要修改下，最好修改完后更容易背住的。图表作文模板The chart gives us an overall picture of the _(图表主题). （sth） has increased a lot,climbing nearly to（上升到达的数据点%）in (年份)./ in the mean time,（sth） has witnessed a dramatic slump, dropping by（下降的差值%.）from (2008)）to（2012）.Apparently, the number of _has been on a dramatic rise/ (decline ) over the past few years. 中间段不管是图表还是图文，是好是坏主题都用-What accounts for the increase(change , difference)? From my perspective, at least three factors contribute to the change (difference). To begin with, the change is closely related to the rising income of the Chinese people. More importantly, the chang has a lot to do with the turning of the peoples attitude towards and outlook on life. Finally, the change is enhanced and promoted by the governments policies as well as the more convenient channels in the_field. 反应好的主题结尾-As the society further develops, the rise /(decline)trend (difference) is bound to continue for a couple of years in the future. As far as I am concerned, it is a positive trend and should be further stimulated, since it is beneficial not merely to individuals but to the whole society.图文作文 标题（不能忘记写） （大作文，无明确，最好不要写题目）图文作文首段-In recent years , along with the tremendous advance of the society, 主题has become a hot issue of the general public especially for those who are confronted with the situation 。in the above picture ,_ 。this interesting picture provokes us to think about_ .反应坏的主题结尾-Then , what can we do to deal with the problem have become a concern to many people . From my views , the following measures should be attached importance to . To begin with , we should appeal to the government to make relevant laws and carry out a series of policy to 跟主旨相关。 Whats more , we should enhance the awareness of people that 主题 is vital to us . Also I believe that we humans can overcome this difficulty , and we will have a brighter future . （如图表所示,_roughly _in _,approximately_in_ around_in _。显然,_has的数量在一个戏剧性（改为显著的）上升在过去的几年里增加(变化,不同)的原因是什么?从我的角度来看,至少有三个因素变化(差异)。首先,变化是密切相关的中国人民的收入在不断增加。（太中式化了，亲，改为：变化与中国人收入的增长密切相关）常更重要的是,人们的态度和人生观转变。最后这些增加还因为政府的更好的政策以及越来越便捷的渠道在这-领域（在-领域的渠道）随着社会的进一步发展,上升趋势(差异)一定会在未来持续几年。（亲，改为在未来几年上升趋势一定会持续）就我个人而言,这是一个积极的趋势,应该进一步的刺激,不仅因为它是有益的对个人,而是整个社会。近年来,随着社会的巨大进步主题已经成为一个公众的热点问题, 特别是对于那些面临这种情况的人 . 然后,我们能做什么来解决这个问题已经成为许多人的关注。从我的观点,下列措施应该被重视 首先,我们应该呼吁政府（加上制定）有关法律、实施一系列的政策关于-。（实施有关-一系列的政策）其次，我们应该提高人们的意识关于-老问题了，不能按部就班的翻译，提高有关-的意识对我们是至关重要的。我也相信我们人类能够克服这个困难,我们将有一个光明的未来翻译没有多大的问题，就是太多chiglish。在批改之前我仔细研究了了下作文，基本分为三段落。行文思路，总分总，句型阵型442.