2012高考总复习（8）：短文改错精讲精练专题训练(一)I have noticed that much of the fiction and nonfiction works publishing in Teen Magazine have a happy endingWhile these are pleasantly to read，one has to ask how it is possible that there is so much optimismIm all for positive thinking，and readers should also be exposed by the darker side of lifeWhy publish a story about someone whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return? After all，thats lifeNot every story have a happy endingI think this would benefit from Teen Magazines readers to see both kinds：happy and real(二) When I was a senior in a high school，I had a teacher calling Mrs SmithShe taught English and she has an important effect on meShe was fill of love for usShe had our class to make posters and hang it around the schoolShe taught us that one kindly act can go long wayWell，Mrs Smith passed away just a couple of year ago after a long battle with the breast cancerIll never forget how a wonderful and sweet lady she wasI am truly blessed to have been known herI am going to be a teacher like her and Ill always remember her kindness(三) China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating hack more than 4000 yearBasic elements for the modern world such as paper，gunpowder，paper money，or compasses originated in ChinaToday，China is again at the forefront of world，with Chinese goods reach all parts of the worldThe Chinese culture have also fascinated many peopleIn the Shaolin Monasteries，the Great Wall of China or the Forbidden City of Beijing，China has its unique arts and architectures that what draw thousands of visitors every yearThe Chinese food is equal popular around the world and it is loved by much non-ChineseBut in China，the food can found in great varieties and is different in region to regionSo join us and experience all these(四)At first I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football matchUsually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch a game in that players kicked a ball to each otherTherefore，my father loves football During the World Cup in 2006，my dad stays up late just to watch his favourite sportSeeing him strong interest in this game of 22 men run after a ball，I decided to sit down to watch the game，I found game exciting，and my dad explained for the rulesWe shared our joyFootball is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad!(五)When Jack bowed to someone，he always did it much too quicklyThey neednt to wait any longer after he finished nodding his headSo he was bland for no mannerThen a warm-hearted man teaches him，“When you bow to somebody next time，you can count the January，February，March，until DecemberThen you can lift your bodyThus，the ceremony will almost perfect”The next day，he met his uncle，but be did as the man told him toThe bow was too long that it made his uncle escape soon with a surprising lookWhen Jack looked down，he found his uncle goneSo he asked a passer-by，“In which month did she go away?” (六)In order to be successful，you should first of all never give up whatever happenIf you fail，you should never lose heartIn the contrary，you must build up your confidence or work even harderYou should always remember that working hard was the key to success，Besides，you should pay a great attention to your working methodsThat is necessary for you to take every chance improve themFinally，you should try to get along well with your co-workers，cared for each other and helping each otherIf you follow these rule，you will certain achieve great success in the future答案与解析部分(一) I have noticed that much of the fiction and nonfiction works publishing in Teen manypublishedMagazine have a happy endingWhile these are pleasantly to read，one has to askpleasanthow it is possible that there is so much optimismIm all for positive thinking，and butreaders should also be exposed by the darker side of lifeWhy publish a story about to notsomeone whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return? After all，thats life who/thatNot every story have a happy endingI think this would benefit Teen hasitMagazines readers to see both kinds：happy and real.答案解析：第一处：works指“作品”时为可数名词，应该用many而不是much修饰；第二处：publishing in Teen Magazine作为works的定语，跟所修饰的名词为被动关系，该用过去分词；第三处：做表语应该用形容词而不是副词，把pleasantly改为pleasant.第四处：and的上下文是转折而不是并列关系，把and改为but.第五处：be exposed to 为固定搭配，意为“遭受,暴露于”。第六处：Why not.?是表示提建议的固定句型，所以在why后加上not.第七处：在这个定语从句someone whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return?中，需要关系代词而不是whose充当从句的主语，把whose改为who/ that.第八处：every story为单数名词，谓语应该用单数，把have改为has.