Zhonghua-AWomanScientistDr.ZhongHua,aged52,isnowworkingatastreetplantasaseniorwomanengineerinShanghaisinceshegraduatedfromBeijingSteelandIronInstitutein1964,shestucktoherstudyandresearchwork.Asaresult,shegotrichscientificfruits.Laterin1982,shewassenttoauniversityinGermanytogoonwithherstudies.Throughhardwork,shegotexcellentresultsandreceivedadoctorsdegreeforphysics.Soonaftershebecamefamous,aGermansteelcompanytriedtoinvitehertoworkthereandpromisedtogiveherhighpay.ButDr.Zhongdidntaccepttheinvitation.Shemadeuphermindtoworkforhermotherland.Therefore,shereturnedtoChinain1987.Nowshehasmadegreatcontributionstohercountry.,Howtoimproveyourwriting,Writingskills,城西中学英语组刘平,高考书面表达题,主要特点,记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明,空间顺序,时间顺序,逻辑顺序,能力要求,书面表达,六步法,书面表达六步法,幻灯片23,怎样使用恰当的连接词,May25,SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday.Thesalesgirltreatedmecoldly.Shedidntadmitthecoatwassoldinhershop.ShesaidthatImadeitdirty.Shegavevariousexcusestorefusemyrequest.Iquarreledwithher.Themanagerturnedup.Heaskedwhatwasthematter.Heknewallaboutthis,heapologizedtomeandcriticized(批评)thesalesgirl.Theychangedanothercoatforme.Isaidgoodbyetothemandtookithomehappily.,May25,SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday._Thesalesgirltreatedmecoldly._Shedidntadmitthecoatwassoldinhershop._ShesaidthatImadeitdirty._Shegavevariousexcusestorefusemyrequest._Iquarreledwithher._Themanagerturnedup.Heaskedwhatwasthematter._Heknewallaboutthis,heapologizedtomeandcriticized(批评)thesalesgirl.Theychangedanothercoatforme.Isaidgoodbyetothemandtookithomehappily.,However,Atthebeginning,Later,Inaword,Igotsoangrythat,Afterthat/Assoonas/Themoment,Justatthatmoment,1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughImweak,Illmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）,Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.,Howtoenrichyourwriting,WeakasIam,Illmaketheeffort.,Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.,Icouldnthavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.,5.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwontbelievewhathesays.（使用状语从句）8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（用并列句）9HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句),NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.,Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.,Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.,Nomatterwhathesays,Iwontbelieve.,Studyhardandyoullmakerapidprogress.,Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!,Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.,Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978,andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.,Peoplehereliveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.,书面表达：,Nowitistakingonanewlook.,Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmallandmostchildrencouldntaffordtogotoschool.,Butnowithasbeenrebuiltand,whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.,Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.,Whatsmore,theyenjoyfreeeducation.,Mayyouenjoyyourstayhere,thenewlybuiltteachingbuilding,/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!,Thankyou.,结论,审题，抓点造句，成文改错，誉写背诵精彩范文,Thankyou,书面表达六步法,一、审题,确定基本要素:5W1H,何时何地何人为何如何做了何事,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,Whathappened?,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Whodidwhat?,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间空间细节连贯呼应,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,卷面不工整扣5分,2002年,最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的组题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的情况。注意：1、信的开头以为你写好。2、词数：100左右。3、参考词汇：门票entrancefeeDearEditor,Imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.,DearEditor,Imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.Whatsmore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.Ontheotherhand,40%ofthemthink(holdtheview)thatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers,andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.Theysuggest,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.YourstrulyLiHua,2002Onepossibleversion,04江苏卷假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。,DearBob，Itsverykindofyoutowritemeandletmeknowaboutyourbeautifulcity.NowIdliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometownJiangchengThecitystandsonthebankoftheChangjiangRiver.Itisabeautifulplaceforpeopletolivein.Itseconomyhasbeendevelopingrapidlyinthepasttenyears.Newfactories,housesandroadshavebeenbuilt.Moreschoolsandhospitalsareavailableforitspeople.However,therearestillsomeproblems,suchaswaterandairpollutionandheavytrafficinrushhours.Inmyopinion,Jiangchengshoulddevelopitseconomyscientifically.Iwouldalsothinkthatthegrowthofitspopulationshouldbebroughtundercontrolsothatwellhaveabe