Sophia,如何精准地使用动词,读后续写微技能指导之, He decided to visit the family. But the shabby cottage was nowhere to be found. He only found a splendid house. He thought the family might die.,TIP1 “小”心思丰满人物内心, Driven by a sense of regret, he decided to visit the family. To his great surprise, the shabby cottage was nowhere to be found. He only found a splendid house. Upon thinking the family might have starved to death, he sighed with guilt.,Vivid & Accurate,Which paragraph is better?,Paragraph 1 Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. At first, Poppy barked at him. Dad gently caressed the little dog and said, “Dont worry, you will get used to the new family.” Mom approached Poppy and said in a low voice, “Poppy, he is your new friend. Be happy.” Poppy became quiet as if he said yes. Dad said in a humorous tone, “You see, Poppy understands what we say! ”,2020年浙江高考英语试卷-读后续写（第一段）,Paragraph 1 Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. At first, Poppy barked at him. Dad gently caressed the little dog，comforting “Dont worry, you will get used to the new family.” Mom approached Poppy and whispered, “Poppy, he is your new friend. Be happy.” Poppy became quiet as if he agreed. Dad joked, “You see, Poppy understands what we say! ”,Vivid & Accurate,Which paragraph is better?,TIP 2: “小”词汇增加表达效果,Brainstorming,tell,whisper,murmur,speak,talk,cry out,shout,respond,reply,explain,scream,roar,announce,declare,yell,call out,say,B1 add，disagree，command， request，persuade， congratulate， beg，sentence,B2 debate，admit, appreciate, bargain， analyse, threaten, respond, charge,B3 apologize, announce, remind, lie consult, sigh, narrate, bet, permit, scream, react, chat, confirm,B4 argue, inspire, support, regret, underline, comment, summarize, translate, conclude, enquire, blame instruct,B5 clarify, quarrel, assess, inform, accuse, deny, demand, approve,B6 appeal, convey, subscribe ,oppose, state, advocate, guarantee,disagree,B7 dictate, congratulate, state, yell, pause, urge, lecture,recommend, comfort, acknowledge, contradict, bark,B8 mourn, object, claim, hesitate, remark, condemn , compromise, howl,Different “says”,1.to speak very quietly or in a low voice 2. to make a long, low sound because you are in pain 3. to give a sudden sharp loud voice 4. to speak with difficulty, repeating sounds or words 5. to talk about other s private lives 6. to take a quick deep breath with your mouth open, especially because you are surprised or in pain 7. to give moral or emotional strength to sb 8. to say sorry for doing sth wrong 9. to blame that sb/sth is responsible for sth bad 10. to order sb to do sth,scream whisper groan gasp stammer gossip criticize comfort commandapologize,呻吟,口吃，结巴,喘气，倒抽气,7,1. He approached me and _ to my ear that he was a bit afraid. 2. She _ herself with the thought that there was still a beam of hope. 3. “Help！Help！”Seeing the blood, the girl _ out in terror. 4. “Im so sorry Im late,”the aunt _to Franklin. 5.People are _about the film stars sudden divorce. 6. “Dont move！Hands up！” The police rushed in and _. 7.The on-lookers_ the driver severely for his careless driving. 8. The old lady lay on the floor _painfully. 9. “A” he _, feeling very confident. 10. The athlete _ before starting to run at the beginning line.,whispered,comforted,screamed,apologized,gossiping,commanded,criticized,howling,blurted out,murmured,11 The government _ a state of emergency. 12 “Get out of my house!” The officer _. 13 Asked why he was late, Alex _ that his car had broken down. 14. Driven by a sense of sympathy, Pappy _(said to the girl loudly) , “How much have you got to spend, Missy?” 15. Tears filling her eyes, she _(said cheerfully) “Hello, Dad.”,declared,roared,explained,called out,cried out,see, watch, observe, peep, look around, look back, stare at, glare at, glance at, catch sight of, lose sight of, etc,walk, run, wander, dash, stroll around, pace back and forth, step into, make ones way to, dance out, etc,各种看和各种走,With a giant tear in her eye, the little girl looked up at him. She forced a smile, _(saying)“Thank you” and _(walked towards )the door.Pappy thought of his daughter. Driven by a sense of sympathy, Pappy_(said to the girl loudly), “How much have you got to spend?” Hearing this, the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars. After thinking for a few seconds, Pappy _(said), “Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky day. The bell costs two dollars.” The child _with great joy, holding the special bell in her hand. Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop, he heard a familiar ringing. He couldnt believe his ears. The girl stood in the doorway, ringing the bell happily. Feeling puzzled, Pappy got close to her and asked, “Have you changed your mind, Miss?” “ No. My Momma says