高分作文标志1：四级120-150字;六级150180字;2、是否长短句交叉;3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说：Other individuals, however, take the attitude that3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion等等)比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge代替enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。Computer and I By SimmyI never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly替换verythrilling替换excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb. be interested in sth.google替换searchan army of替换a lot ofThe dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!本文来源:考试大网The dawn of the new century witnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasing popularity替换more and more popularCoincident with非常地道的词汇，表达“与一致”的意思，替换WithAdvancement替换developmentPour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换enter intoCurrent ( currently )替换nowAppeal to sb.替换sb. be interested in sth.Growing individuals替换more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start替换To begin withWe can, freely, search用了插入语的写作手法our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动Additionally替换In addition / BesidesDeliver替换sendThere is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,*, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of替换do harm toEmerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing )Net citizen网民，属于精彩用词As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds替换Every coin has two sidesComputers do play，do强调Positive替换important / good等A slice of替换a part ofUnfavorable替换badImpacts替换effects / influencesWe should, therefore, take advantage of使用插入语Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换advantage ( defects替换disadvantage )Facet替换aspect各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢!以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。1.individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive代替eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many.注：用many, if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有词。Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理用most, if not all ,代替most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,hold the view that, it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)7:affair ,business ,matter代替thing8: shared代common9.reap huge fruits代替get much benefit )10:for my part ,from my own perspective代替in my opinion11:Increasing(ly),growing代替more and more(注意没有gro