Unit1 Friendship (Writing)课堂51.掌握建议信的写作思路。2.学会写建议信，能就某一问题或事件委婉得体地提出建议。教材展示 知识梳理 建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告的一种文体。建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。写信时要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要委婉和缓。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。【写作步骤】首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。建议信写作的注意事项：a.这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。b.这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。【写作语料库】英语建议信的常用词句A.建议信开头常用句式（照应材料，表明写作意图）1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that.2. I am very glad to hear that you want to.3. I know you have trouble in.after reading your letter.4. I am writing to you for the purpose of.5. I am writing to share some advice with you.6. In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.B.建议信第二段常用句式，给出建议，井然有序。1. first，firstly，secondlythen，after that，in the end，finally，meanwhile2. I think it would be more beneficial if you could.C.建议信结尾常用句式1. I believe you will take my advice into account.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。【典题示例】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条路线可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的路线；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】审题谋篇：词汇推敲：1.推荐recommend2.此外moreover3.景色scenery4.令人惊异的amazing5.选择choice遣词造句：1.完成句子长江是中国最长的河流，并且是中华文明的母亲河之一。The Yangtze River is the longest river and one of the mother rivers of the Chinese civilization.我更喜欢沿着长江旅行。I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River.沿江景色令人惊叹。The scenery along the river is amazing.沿江有很多著名景点。There are many wellknown sightseeing spots along the river.2.句式升级用同位语结构连接句I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of the Chinese civilization.用with结构连接句The scenery along the river is amazing, with many wellknown sightseeing spots.【答案】Dear Jim，Im happy to receive your letter and know youre coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally，I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of the Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many wellknown sightseeing spots. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice.Hope youll have a good time in China.Yours,Li Hua即学即练 一、短文改错There was a time when Zhang Yi and I was good friends, but now we are like two stranger. On his first day in our class two years ago, he had somebody to talk to. I was the first to say hello to him, so we became friends. Zhang Yi did good in math and he was always ready to helping me with it. One day last month, I told him about that I would be away from school for two days to see a friend. And he told my father about it and that made me angrily. Now, I know I am wrong. I decided to say sorry to him, because I dont want to lose such good friend.二、书面表达假设你是李华，你的好友王芳喜欢打排球，但老师和家长都极力劝她放弃打排球，全身心投入高考。为此，她非常纠结和郁闷。请你给她写一封建议信，帮她解决这个困扰。内容包括：1.介绍写信的目的；2.提出建议和理由；3.表达愿望。注意：1.词数100词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示词：排球volleyball 高考college entrance examination知识拓展 建议信要写出写信的目的、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。正文一般采用“三段式”结构：1.开头：开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点。2.主体：对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议。3.结尾：呼应开头，重申观点。注意：陈述的建议要有说服性；内容要简明扼要，抓住问题关键。【增分佳句】1.常用的开头语I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你可能经常觉得孤独。Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.很高兴收到你的来信，询问我关于学好汉语的意见。Turn to me whenever you feel puzzled, and I am more than willing to give you some more advice.当你困惑的时候就来找我吧，我很乐意给你一些更多的建议。Here are some tips to help you.=Here are a few suggestions to help you.这里有能帮助你的一些建议。2.主体部分常用表达First(ly), why not join a club? If you do this, you can make friends.首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部呢？这样做，你能交到朋友。Second(ly), you should/can try to talk with others. Then/That way, you will feel better.其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。Third(ly), it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down.第三，看书或听音乐挺好的。这样做，你能平静下来。Last but not least, you should talk with her first.最后但并非最不重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。3.常用的结束语I hope you will find these ideas useful.希望你会觉得这些办法