中山火炬职业技术学院英语培训PETS 3 写作专题,小作文（A节）备考点拨与实践 大作文（B节）备考点拨与实践 模拟/预测题,By Li bona,考点： 1. 命题化作文 2. 图表作文 3. 信件作文 任考两种，进行组合，必然有信件题。,命题化作文 正反观点对比题目 现象作文,正反观点对比题目模版 第三段写四句。 第一句：From what has been discussed above, we may come to the conclusion that . As a mother, it is easy in modern sociey. 第二句：On the one hand, . 第三句：On the other hand, . 第四句：Only in this way can we .,现象作文模版,第一段只写两句： 第一句：In recent years, there has been 第二句：How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people. 第二段只写四句： 第一句：What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are reasons. 第二句：Firstly, as we see, more and more people own private cars ,so car emission is the main cause of air pollution. 第三句：Secondly,it is a pity that ., cause water pollution. 第四句：Finally, dont realize how it is important to protect our environment .,第三段只写四句： 第一句：How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people. 第二句：For one thing, 第三句：For another, government should take action/measures to prevent pollution 第四句：Only in this way can we successfully solve the problem.,Part I 应用文写作（A节）,定义：应用、实用、简易写作 考点：基础语言+规范格式+信息点+语言点,方法及应试概要,理论：格式 正式文体，非正式文体 数据：100（30）字、8句话、3段式； 15-20分钟、10分题 类型： 邀请信、祝贺信、感谢信、推荐信、介绍信、 申请信、求职信、询问信、投诉信、私人信函、 通 知、便签及便条等,方法： 悉格式 练模版 背句式 塑亮点,得高分,基本类型与黄金模版,写作流程 参考范文 常用句型 呼语和落款相对固定 “邀请信” 之 黄金模版：,向对方发出邀请,阐述邀请原因意义,指出时间地点,表达期盼和谢意,邀请信,常用句型： Im pleased to invite you to attend Its my pleasure/a great honor to We are looking forward to seeing you. We sincerely hope you could come. I hope you wont decline my invitation.,祝贺信,常用句型： Im delighted to hear that you Congratulations on your Accept my heartiest congratulations on Best wishes for continued progress and success. We are all proud of you!,“祝贺信”之黄金模版,简述对方成就,再次表达祝福,表达祝贺,感谢信,常用句型： I am grateful to you for I can never thank you enough. It was really kind and generous of you . Many thanks for your kindness and hospitality. Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you. Please accept my sincere appreciation for,“感谢信“之黄金模版,指出致谢缘由,阐述致谢细节,再次表达感激之情,表达谢意,申请信,常用句型： I would like to apply for admission to your college. I hope you will kindly send me an application form. I would greatly appreciate receiving copies of the required application forms and instructions .,“申请信”之黄金模版,陈述相关信息,对推荐人的评价,表明个人愿望,点明推荐人及推荐理由,求职信,常用句型： I wish to apply for the position of which you advertised in . I have been working in since my graduation, and have therefore attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field. Hoping that my qualifications will meet your favorable consideration. Looking forward to your reply . I would be grateful if I have an opportunity to talk with you.,“求职信”之黄金模版,表明求职愿望,个人简历,介绍消息来源,指出求职优势,提出获职打算,请求回复并致谢,辞职信 申请信 介绍信 询问信 投诉信 备忘录 通 知 私人信函及便签等,PRACTICE 1,Directions: (15 minutes) You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan. Write your letter with about 100 words. Write it on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your name at the end of the letter; use Li Ming instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points),One possible version,To whom it may concern, I am writing to ask you whether you could help me find a child in a remote area to whom I will offer my financial aid. It would be most helpful if the recipient of my financial assistance is a primary school girl living in the western region of my country. Girls in poor regions are often forced to drop school because of poverty, and I hope one of them can have the chance to finish schooling with my help. The candidate should be a girl at the age of 8-10 and her previous score reports should prove her potential to be an outstanding student in the future.,I would like to give the girl my financial support annually until she graduates from college. The money will cover her tuition fee and other expenses at school. Besides, I will correspond with her frequently so that she can seek advice whenever she needs. I really appreciate your help and look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming,PRACTICE 2,Directions: (15 minutes) Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs use Li Ming instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points),One possible version,Dear Mr. Wang, I would like to inform you that I will be resigning as the editor of Designs ,How to write good sentences ?,一、句子要简洁 A hero is nothing but a product of his time. 时势造英雄。 写作要求精练，因为，简洁的表达能起到更加强调的作用。我们要写出效果好、影响大的文章，就要想方设法1）避免使用空洞、多余的短语；2）避免过多地使用较长的句子结构，如并列句和从属句等；3）避免不必要的重复。请看下面各例： 1）Owing to the fact that I had a lot of work to do, it wasnt possible for me to accept their invitation. 本句要表达的意思很简单，可是一堆空洞的短语使句子显得很累赘，改为下面的句子就简洁明了多了。 I was too busy to accept their invitation.,2) He is a man who is honest, who always pays his just debts, and who observes the golden rules in his