中考英语书面表达高分突破,一，河南中招英语作文评分标准,书面表达，15分。考生应根据题目要求，采用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语， 完整、准确地表达所要求的内容。分四档评分。 第一档：符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，语言无误。13-15分。 第二档：基本符合题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰，表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。912分。 第三档：部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。4-8分。 第四档：不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚，或照抄、拼凑几个词语。0-3分。,1. 审题不清 如有一年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的 课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为 “我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活 动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文 章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词 如何准确，都会被判为三四类作文。,中考英语作文常见问题分析,2.拼写问题 拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，一般来说两个错误扣一分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。,3，语法问题 语法问题主要包括：名词单复数, 动词的时态与语态以及缺少动词的情况, 形容词和副词的等级形式,代词、介词、数词和冠词的使用, 主谓一致等等方面的错误。另外,还有诸多常见的固定句式的错误。经调查分析, 学生的语法错误主要是受母语的负迁移影响。,语法问题之 缺少动词 在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但 英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成 如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语， 而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一 定要加上be动词，写成：Im tired. 误 I happy I can come to Beijing zoo. 正 I am happy I can come to Beijing zoo. 误 The apples cheap. Ill take some. 正 The apples are cheap. Ill take some.,语法问题之 代词的误用 英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误 误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father. 正 y mother and Iwent to the shop to buy a present for my father.,减少失分，重在夯实基础,通过前面对学生问题的分析，不难看出如果能学好英语这八类词：名词 、动词 、形容词、副词、介词、数词、冠词和连词。能正确使用5种基本句型，两种语态，这些初中阶段要求掌握的基础知识，作文失分一定会大大减少。,Head Beginning,Body,Tail Ending,Structure,Beginning,Body,Ending,Concluding sentence 结论句,Supporting sentence 支持句（例子、实事、数据或引文）,topic sentence 主题句,Structure,开门见山，紧扣主题,总结观点，发表己见，首尾呼应,总 分 总,结尾通常总结文章主要观点, 或者发表自己的观点等等.,Steps of writing,1. Cross-question(审题),Style (体裁） Person（人称） Tense（时态）,默读题目弄清要求,抓取有效信息,并适当分析。,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,牛刀小试,Cross-question(审题),Style (体裁）：_ Person（人称）：_ Tense（时态）: _,调查报告，记叙文,第一人称,一般现在时,Before writing,1. Cross-question(审题),据实描写： 适当发挥：,度假方式,细节及提倡假日休闲,Steps of writing,2. An outline drawing（概略图）,List key points(列要点) Arrange and Add (布局加首尾),如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲,根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。,List key points,列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如有漏点，扣分最多！,List key points,1.A lot of people travel. 2.Some people stay at home. 3.Some other people visit friends or parents. 4.A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）,加(add),加首尾 总分总,Steps of writing,3. Sentence Making and Beautifying,word,phrase,sentence,Beautifying,内容和语言表达 内容全面，表达有新意或亮点,Steps of writing,3. Sentence Making and Beautifying（美化）,word,phrase,sentence,Beautifying,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning) A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.(the ending),most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.,美(beautify),方法一:善用意义相近的 高级词汇，避免行文单调,英语写作技巧,Which is better?,1我希望你能帮助我。,A I hope you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help.,2 我不吃垃圾食品。,A I dont eat junk food. B I stay away from junk food.,3 我们应该努力取得好成绩。,A We should work hard to get good grades. B Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.,Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.,some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.,some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.,It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work.,It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work.,方法二 : 活用多种句型,避免重复和呆板,增加文采,英语写作技巧,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型, 以正确、通顺为最基本要求,Which is better?,1 雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。,A It rained heavily. So he didnt catch the school bus. B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.,missed,because of,2 我们应该保护环境。,A We should protect the environment. B Its our duty to protect the environment.,Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）,As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）,只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻,Proverb（谚语）,方法三: 妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。,英语写作技巧,加谚语(Proverb),集中注意力于学习,We should concentrate on our studies.,As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.,加谚语(Proverb)