学 海 无 涯 1 高考作文满分练高考作文满分练求助求助信信 题型解读题型解读： 在求助信中应开门见山，直截了当地把你遇到的难题或者困惑告诉对方，并 向对方求助。应注意：（1）向别人征求意见，态度一定要诚恳，语气委婉； （2）把握时态：应用一般现在时表明目前自己存在的困难，用一般将来时 描述自己得到帮助后的进步。 写作思路 满分词汇 满分短语 满分句型 Para.1: 点名身份+直 接说明写信的求助 目的 bother trouble v. do sb. a favor take the trouble to do. have trouble/difficulty in doing have no choice but to do turn to sb. for help 1.I am a middle school student and Im writing to tell you my problem which has troubled me. 2. Im writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor. 3. Im wondering if you could take the trouble to help me with 4. Im sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need your help. 5. I have some difficulty in doing, which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help. Para.2: 说明自己存在的困 难、困惑并请求对方 的帮助。言辞一定要 礼貌得体 confused confusing upset worried anxious anxiety fit in with with others= ge on well with others be accustomed to long to lose heart 1. I seem not to be able to fit in well with others here. 2. I dont feel quite accustomed to the life here. 3. I long to learn English well but I dont know how, which makes me upset. 4. I cant concentrate on my lessons these days and I failed in the last exam which worries me a lot. 5. I often feel left out in this school, and I dont know how it has come about. 6. Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help Para. 3 (客套话) 情真意切表达期盼 之情。 timely eager grateful appreciate request account sb. would appreciate it if take into consideration/account. 1. Im eager to get your timely help. /Im eager for your timely help. 2. I will be very grateful if you could help me . 3. Id appreciate if you could take my request into consideration/ account. 4. I would be grateful if you could really give/lend me a hand. 注意：作文的主体时态主体时态：一般现在时为主，一般将来时偶尔穿插。 学 海 无 涯 2 满分模板： Dear _(写信对象), My name is _; Im writing to ask whether you could do me a favour. I have had much difficulty/trouble in _(交代自己面临的困难). Besides, Im very upset that _（提出令自己苦恼的问题）. Whats more, I dont know _（进一步说明自己的困境） Im wondering if you could be so kind as to _ so that _（再次请求对方的帮助）. Id appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 优秀作文欣赏：优秀作文欣赏： 题目 1： （2016 全国卷 1）假如你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请和个人 简历（resume） 。给外教 Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附的文字和格式（format） 。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯 Sample: Dear Ms Jenkins, Im writing to ask whether you could do me a favor. In order to gain some social experience and improve my work ability. Im going to take a part- time job during the summer vacation. So interested in the position in a foreign-captured company am I that Ive already written an application letter and my resume all in English. However, Im afraid that there might be some grammar mistakes or inappropriate format in the materials that I prepared. Would you be so kind as to correct the mistakes and improve the format of the application and resume for me. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to help me. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 题目 2. 假如你是李华，你家乡的梨花节(Ewha Festival)负有盛名，你写了一篇英文宣传稿， 想请外籍教师 Bob 帮忙润色。请根据提示用英语给 Bob 写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.求助事由；2.求助内容；3.表达感激 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Sample: Deer bob, Im writing to you in the hope that you will be so kind as to do me a favor. When it comes to the Ewha Festival. Theres no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown. I, for a long time, have been desiring to write an appealing article to make it better known. However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find my English far from satisfying. As far as I know, you have such a good command of written English as impresses me a lot. Therefore, Im wondering whether you could take the trouble to have my draft polished at your convenience. I would be grateful if you could take my request into consideration. Yours, Li Hua 学 海 无 涯 3