必修2 Modules 46,话题之四家庭生活 三年3考 2011陕西高考假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。,Im the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong? 写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法；2. 陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；3. 提出至少两条建议。要求：短文词数不少于100。,Hi, TigerMom, What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.,Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.,So I suggest that you take your friends advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.,1. 本文以博客回复的形式来写，反映了命题的鲜明时代性。另外，全文结构清晰，要点齐全, 切合试题要求。 第一段首先表明自己的态度，承接家长博客话题引出本文。 第二段说明原因，结合实例，可信度强。 第三段提出自己的建议，然后用三个并列句表达，说服力强。,2. 全文行文流畅，使用词汇恰当。 高级词汇和短语：evaluate, ignore, turn out, by no means, mentally and physically, make mistakes 高级句型：What puzzles you. . . , My idea is that. . . , . . . as they were expected, The reason is often that. . . 语篇过渡语：although, furthermore, so, more importantly,【佳作习得】完成句子 Chinese players won 5 gold medals in Vancouver Winter Olympic Games, _(正如我们先前预料到的).,as we had expected before,基础指导（四）衔接过渡,书面表达的评分标准是把衔接与过渡作为重要标准来要求的。学生要学会恰当地使用这些表示逻辑关系的关联词语，使文章前后连贯、结构紧凑、过渡自然。,一、使用过渡性词语 1.表递进关系的过渡词: besides, in addition, moreover, whats more， whats worse等。 2.表转折对比的过渡词： but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, despite, in spite of, whereas, nevertheless等。 3.表结果的过渡词: so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that等。,4.表换一种方式表达的过渡词: in other words, that is to say, to put it another way等。 5.表达普遍规律 generally speaking，in general，all in all等。,6.表总结的过渡词: in a word, in general, in short, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, in summary等。 7.表特定的顺序关系的过渡词: first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last, eventually等。,二、使用过渡性句子 段与段之间除了借助于一些篇章层次上的连接性词语，如however,on the other hand,on the contrary,similarly,therefore,in conclusion,in short等，还经常需要使用一些表示过渡的句子来确保其连贯性。常见的过渡性句子类型有： 1.设问引出下文 为了引出下文所要表达的内容，作者有时采用设问的方式引出下文。,2.总体陈述不同观点 有时作者在前一个段落列举各种现象或者引出某个要供大家讨论的话题之后，接下来就要从整体上论述人们对此持有的不同看法，然后再具体论述各种观点，如Different people have different opinions towards it.等。,3.举实例佐证 有时为了增强某个观点或者现象的说服力，我们可以使用实例加以佐证。可以使用“take .for example”来引出下文。 三、利用代词指代上文提到过的事物 英语中比较习惯运用代词来代替上文提到过的人和事物，从而增强上下文的连贯性并避免重复，使语言更加简洁明了。,.根据中文意思，将下列英文句子补充完整 1.首先, 需要休息, 因为在这几年努力学习之后我的确感到累了。 _, a good rest is needed _I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years.,First of all,because,2.就我自己而言, 我正准备上大学, 就要离开我学习了三年的母校了。 _, Im preparing to enter a university _ leaving the high school where Ive been studying for three years.,As far as Im concerned,and,3.一般而言，为了保持身体健康, 我们应该饮食多样化, 除主食外, 通常还包括适量的鱼、肉、蔬菜和水果。 _, to keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit _main food.,Generally speaking,as well as/besides/in addition to,4.就拿北京来说吧, 它是世界上最古老的都市之一。 _. It is one of the oldest cities in the world.,Take Beijing for example,5.总而言之, 让我们面带笑容迎接每一天吧。 _, lets greet every day with a smile.,In a word,6.一方面60%的学生反对公园收门票，另一方面，40%的学生认为应该收门票。 _, 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees;_, 40% think that fees should be charged.,On (the) one hand,on the other hand,.根据句意填入适当的过渡词或短语 1.John is clever, diligent and polite,_, he is a good student. 2.Lucy is 12 and Lily is 11,_, Lucy is one year older than Lily. 3.He is a good master _he treats his servants well. 4.You must work harder,_ you will be put into another class. 5.He is poor,_ he is happy.,in other words,that is,because,or,but,.阅读下列短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空（并根据行文补上第三段首句） second, as a result, despite, on (the)one hand, whats worse, in a word,As a new way of shopping, online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life. _, online shopping has many advantages.First, online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things.Instead of searching a crowded store, we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like._, it is much faster for us to do shopping.We dont have