2016高考英语短文改错一轮练习（1）及答案短文改错Dear Peter，Im writing to ask whether you can do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopeful a girl in her early twenty, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept that at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share her our traveling experiences, and whatever we have in common. And I believe I would improve my English by doing so and learn more about his country. I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours，Susan【参考答案：】Dear Peter，Im writing to ask whether you can do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, a girl in her early ， and with interests similar to mine. In my mind，she is someone who is in traveling, swimming，and playing table tennis. ， it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share her our traveling experiences, whatever we have in common. And I believe I improve my English by doing so and learn more about country. I look forward to from you soon.Yours.Susan短文改错Dear Li Lei，I am writing to provide my sincere congratulations on your graduation from senior high school and enrollment by the Peking University. I know you worked very hard in the past years, so I am truly happy to see that all your effort get rewards. I am sure your parents are great proud of you.I just want you to know how pleasing I am to witness your success. Being admitted by Peking University is a new start for you, who will bring you a good chance to learn of top professors. However, its good for you to study with such many excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard. I wish you a greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four years.Sincerely Yours，Han Meimei【参考答案】：Dear Li Lei，I am writing to my sincere congratulations on your graduation from senior high school and enrollment by the Peking University. I know you worked very hard in the past years, so I am truly happy to see that all your effort rewards. I am sure your parents are proud of you. I just want you to know how I am to witness your success. Being admitted by Peking University is a new start for you, will bring you a good chance to learn top professors. ， its good for you to study with many excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard. I wish you a greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four years. Sincerely Yours，Han Meimei短文改错Dear David，Im writing this letter to express my sincerely apologies to you for lose the book you lent to me. Im very grateful you lent it to me. In order to give it back to you as soon as possible, I took it to the library yesterday. I also borrow some other books in the library after I left. Unluckily, when I arrived my dormitory, I couldnt find my book. I searched all the my dormitory or the road from the dormitory to the library. The next day I also looked for it in the library. However, I couldnt find your book. Im sorry I cant give it back to you on time as I promised ago. But I will buy a new one for you later. Hope you can receive my apologies.Yours Sincerely, Li Lei【参考答案】：Dear David，Im writing this letter to express my apologies to you for the book you lent to me. Im very grateful you lent it to me.In order to give it back to you as soon as possible, I took it to the library yesterday. I also some other books in the library I left. Unluckily, when I arrived my dormitory, I couldnt find book. I searched all the my dormitory the road from the dormitory to the library. The next day I also looked for it in the library. However, I couldnt find your book. Im sorry I cant give it back to you on time as I promised . But I will buy a new one for you later. Hope you can my apologies.Yours Sincerely, Li Lei短文改错When it came to city and country life，I think they all have their own advantages and disadvantages.For city life，you know，the traffic is too convenient that you can arrange your life flexible and easily.At the same time，there are many great opportunity for you when looking for jobs.Also，there is no doubt the quality of life is fantastic.Fortunately，living in cities，you will suffer much stress and heavy air pollution.For country life，as we all know it, the life is peaceful and the environment is beautiful，which is both good for your health.However，it is inconvenient for people to go out.Besides，the communication is easy.【参考答案：】When it to city and country life，I think they have their own advantages and disadvantages.For city life，you know，the traffic is convenient that you can arrange your life and easily.At the same time，there