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高二英语作文专题训练一、图表类:(一)2010年央视春晚的广告收入创新高,但节目中的植入广告引发了热议。最近,某网站举行了一次题为“对今年春晚植入广告的态度”的调查,请根据以下饼图(pie chart)所示信息用英语写一篇短文,并提出你自己的看法。注意: 1对所给提示,不要简单翻译,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。2词数150左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。3植入广告:product placement满分文展示1:The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.The opinions on this topic vary from person to person. One in four think there is so much of product placement that lots of people feel unsatisfied when they watch the programmes. And 10% of the people think product placement in the programmes greatly ruins the image of CCTV, beause it will leave a bad impression on audience in and outside China. Besides, nearly one third of the people hold the opinion that its hard to relate the product placement to the programmes, making the audience feel uncomfortable.However, there are 15% of the people who think it is helpful for the development of CCTV. And the rest think there is no need for us to be so strict with product placement. After all, its very natural.Personally, the product placement is really disgusting and CCTV should try to avoid it.本文总体结构非常清晰,作者通过整合拼图,谈论对待广告的两大观点,最后陈述自己的观点,除此之外,作者在选词造句上也下了一番工夫。在开头,中间以及最后的结尾处,优美、地道的句式层出不穷,一些高级词汇相互响应,熠熠生辉,值得其他学生借鉴。满分文展示2:The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.According to the pie chart, we can see 15% of the surveyed people think its difficult to develop CCTV without the product placement, because it can provide enough money. At the same time, 20% of them think the product placement is presented in the progamme in a natural way.On the other hand, the rest of the people are against the move and they have their own reasons. Nearly one third of them say the product placement has little to do with the programmes, which reduces their interests in the programmes. And 10% of the people hold the idea that the disadvantage that it ruins the image of CCTV outweighs its advantage. Besides, a quarter complain there are too much product placement in the programmes.As far as Im concerned, even if its common to see product placement, I dont think it should appear in some programmes of art and culture.本文反映出作者对英文写作极强的驾驭能力,首先作者能够很好地审题,通过图表找准信息,并且将文章结构安排地很合理,让读者一目了然,再次,作者在语言方面极具天赋,从开始的一个without的强调句,到非限制性定语从句,及后来的同位语从句,让读者目不暇接,一些高级词汇及过渡词的使用让文章更加完美。标准范文:The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.As is shown in the pie chart, 20% of the people surveyed think it acceptable, for the product placement appears in the programmes naturally. And 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make money from product placement, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself.However, among the people surveyed, more than one third of them complain that the product placement has nothing to do with the programmes. 25% of them even feel hurt seeing so much of it. Furthermore, the rest 10% hold the view that great harm has been done to the image of CCTV.From the chart we can draw a conclusion that most of the people surveyed are against product placement in the programmes. In my opinion, product placement nowadays is almost unavoidable, but it should not damage the art of the show and should take the audiences feelings into account.(二)你班同学开展了一场“司机醉驾是否应该处罚乘客”的讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息,给报社写一封信,介绍讨论的情况,并发表你的看法。少数同学赞成处罚乘客大多数同学反对处罚乘客1、减少交通事故,促进交通安全。2、不乘坐醉酒司机的车,不仅是对自己的负责,也是对司机和路人负责。1、乘客难以判断司机是否醉酒。2、即使乘客知道司机饮酒,如果司机不听从乘客的劝诫,处罚乘客是不公平的。你的看法:满分文展示1:Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.A small part of the students approve of it for the reason that on one hand, this punishment can decrease the amount of the traffic accidents. On the other hand, it can improve the safety of passengers and drivers. Besides, avoiding riding in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only responsible for us, but also for the driver and pedestrians.However, the majority of the students are strongly against this punishment in that they think it hard for passengers to judge whether the driver has drunk or not. Whats more, even the passengers know the driver has drunk, if the driver doesnt accept their advice, its unfair to punish the passengers.Personally, I think people who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished because the publics safety is the most important.作者分三个段落来完成此篇书面表达,先说明少数人赞成的观点,接着说明多数人反对的观点,最后给出作者自己的观点,并说明理由。结构紧凑,要点全面,作者观点鲜明,理由具有说服力。文章中作者使用了大量的高级词汇和高级结构,为文章增添了色彩。on one hand, on the other hand, besides, however, whats more, personally等过渡词增强了文章的流畅性。满分文展示2:Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether pas
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