专题07 短文改错高频考点TOP7 并列句考点一And, so, but, or误用由并列连词( and, but, or, so, not onlybut also, however, neither nor, eitheror, still)把两个或两个以上的互相独立的分句连接而成的句子叫做并列句。并列句之间的关系有并列、转折、选择、因果等关系。1) 表递进或顺承关系：常用连词and, bothand, as well as , not only but also, neithernor等连接。He is a lovely boy and he is helpful.他很可爱，乐于助人。2) 转折关系：常用连词but, however, yet（然而，可是）等连接I can come, but will be a little late.我能来，但是要稍晚一些。3) 选择关系：常用连词or, eitheror, notbut, or else等连接Either give a hand, or leave right away.或者帮忙，或者立刻离开。4) 因果关系：常用连词for, so 等连接She is kind to the others, so all of us love her. 她对别人很好，所以我们都喜欢她。1) She never said she was rich, and she was.2) Mr Smith worked very hard so without any success.考点二 如并列连词and, or前后连接为动词词组，则要考虑并列关系是否一致1) Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.2) In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and showed it to the world.（1） We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do. （2） I told Mother， Father， Sister， all my friends here what a great time I had. （3） It is a very important exam but I cant afford to fail it. （4） She was smiling but nodding at me. （5） It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. （6） The food was expensive and the service was good. （7） Im the captain of our school team so with my fellow players weve won several games. （8） My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.（9） So once youve started collecting seriously， you（10） Clever as she is， but she works very hard. （11） I teach them， play with them， but watch them growing up.【湖南省长郡中学2019届高三上学期第一次月考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。My fathers friend Henry used to be a teacher at a medical school and he was very strict with his students. The students were afraid of him though he was seldom pleased of the answers they gave. Once a student was seated before him, and Henry required him describe a certain illness, his description of which turned out to be OK. ThenHenry asked about the cure for the illness, but the student gave the right answer. 6eHow much will you give the patient? “A full spoon!” Suddenly the student realizes that there was anything wrong. He said anxiously, “Ive made the mistake a full spoon is too many, and he can take only five drops.” “Its too late; your patient has been died,” Henry said cold.【2019届四川省华蓥市第一中学高三入学调研】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I am the shared bike. Id like to be on the street to serve for people. They can ride me just via a mobile app. But horrible things happen a few days ago. Several people stole some of us with paying their bills on the app but treated us badly. They broke my saddle and even threw my friends everywhere. We felt angry for which those bad guys had done. Thanks to some kindly people, we received careful “treatment”. Now, you help as well as the whole societys attention is what we need most. We are designed to help people who are stuck the heavy traffic. We are neither toy nor private vehicles. Please obey the basic rules.【湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2019届高三上学期月考（一）】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉修改；在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Mao Zhaomu drop out of high school several years ago. Now the self-taught English learner has been admitted to one of Chinas top foreign language university. Sichuan International Studies University, that he used to deliver food to students. Mao once worked a delivery man for a restaurant, And he chatted happy with English learners online during her spare time. There were much grammatical mistakes, but that didnt prevent him from chatting. To seize every chance to study English. he would memorize words while wait for customers. Mao said that how he hoped very much to become an interpreter. Whoever have a dream and dares to seek it is the loveliest person.【河南省中原名校2019届高三第一次质量考评】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）51.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Rain is of greatly importance to us. Without rain, our water supply would cut off and we would die, such would plants and animals. Therefore, too much rain does a lot of harms to us. It floods fields, towns and cities, cause great losses for us. So far, mans control over rain had never stopped.1f we can gain more effective control over rain, we will enjoy more freedom fro