Through the ice,读后续写（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 About a half-mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond. In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there. The pond wore a collar of black mud. It was not a place for swimming. In late summer, the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum(起泡的浮渣). Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it. We stayed away. When winter came, the pond was once again an inviting place. One day when ice covered it, Harry said to me, “Try walking across.” The ice looked solid. No water showed through it, but I hesitated. “Go ahead.” Harry urged. “Try it. Youre lighter than I am. If the ice holds, we can run and slide carefully on it. Itll be fun.” I wanted to please Harry, and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice. I began to slide across the pond. In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack(裂缝)! I stretched out(伸展) my arms. The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water. I thought of the bottom of the pond. I knew it would be black and awful down there, full of mud and maybe rotting creatures. I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The hole widened. I was wearing a coat of heavy material. As it became completely wet, it dragged me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice. I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to the spot. “I cant get out!” I screamed when I caught some breath.,注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond. Paragraph 2: The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.,A story,when,where,who,what,how,why,Reading for a story,Reading for setting,I,Harry,a pond,lay behind our farm,wore a collar of black mud,a green and bubbly scum,sometime smelly,unsuitable for swimming,stay away,an inviting place,brothers,skip stones,In summer,In winter,contrast,Events A. The pond in winter was so inviting in winter that I decided to slide across it at the instigation of my brother. B. I strived to climb out of the icy water by myself, but in vain. C. With the ice cracking, I fell into a hole in the ice. D. The pond behind our farm was not suitable for swimming in the summer.,D,A,C,B,Reading for plot,urged,hesitated,cracking,shocked,hanging,in vain,exhausted,becoming wet through and dragging me down,willing,agreed,outstretched,trapped /caught,rooted to the spot,screamed his help,scared,anxious,please,How about Harry?,hopeful,nervous,Inferring the development,Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond. Paragraph 2: The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.,Infer the development from the given sentences,I was rescued.,Inferring the development,Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond. Paragraph 2: The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.,I was rescued.,Raise questions about the development,Inferring the development,Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond. Paragraph 2: The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.,I was rescued.,Raise questions about the development,What was my response to his leaving?,Did he really leave me alone?,How was I rescued?,What did mum react to the accident?,How can the story be ended rationally?,Inferring the development,Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond.,1 What was my response to his leaving? 2 Did he really leave me alone? 3 How was I rescued?,Feeling: dismay; disappointment; despair Action: wonder; exclaim,Let “body language” speak!,Way: with the help of an oak branch Action: push; wriggle; grab; drag,Let “action” speak!,How to express disappointment / dismay:,皱眉,“Where could he go?” I murmured with a fierce frown.,失望地看,I shot/threw/cast a frustrated look at him.,摇头,I just shook my head in hopelessness.,哭,Tears of grievance (委屈) /rivns/ came into my eyes with the figure of my brother out of sight.,Staring at the familiar figure out of sight, I was trembling with rage and chill.,颤抖,Let “body language” speak!,Tips for writing,_ by a strong sense of nervousness and anxiety, Harry didnt know what to do, his heart _wildly. A flush of frustration _ from the bottom of my heart, I froze with terror, trembling in icy water and hard to breathe. The thought of being abandoned/deserted by Harry _ my mind, dismay and despair _ in my heart. The icy water _ my skin with needle-like chill as I was _(湿透) to the skin and _(颤抖). Desperate and exhausted, I was on the verge of_(奔溃). “Harry. Dont leave me alone.” I _ at the