Proofreading,短文改错,2,高考短文改错是知识和能力的综合测试题, 词数110字左右，多为记叙文，偶尔有应用文和说明文。 短文改错考查语言知识的多个方面, 主要为词法、句法、行文逻辑以及语篇结构等，共设10处错误，分值10分。三种改错形式， 所占比例为：,Task 1: Brief Introduction,1 : 1 : 8,一删一加八处改,Task 2: Analysis of NMET,高考新课标 I 四年短文改错考点分布统计表,1,1 1 2 0 1 1 1,1 1 1 2 2 1 1 1,2 1 2 0 2 1 1 1,7 5 7 4 5 4 4 4,动词 (v.),名词(n),连词 (conj.),形容词(adj.),副词(adv.),代词(pron.),冠词(art.),介词(prep.),2,3,0,1,1,1,1,特点：考点分布全面, 代词冠词介词一般不重复考察,Task 3: How? (Discovery of Methods),谓语动词考点：_ _ _ _ _,1) When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. 2) Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very serious problem. 3) Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. 4) My dream school look like a big garden.,时态 语态（主被动） 主谓一致 情态动词助动词 人称和数的变化 等,1.动词 1) 谓语动词,考点1.1:,thought,should,looks,1.动词 2) 非谓语动词,非谓语三种形式_ _ _考虑它在句中所作成分与_主语之间的_关系. 注意: 1)and前后一致 2) 介词后接_ 3)动词宾语 ving 或者to do 要牢记,to do ving. ved.,逻辑,主被动,考点1.2:,ving,1.动词 2) 非谓语动词,1) We can choose between staying at home and take a trip. 2) I also shared with my friends many photos taking in Beijing. 3) I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits. 4) With the help of Kitty, a roommate of mine, Ive soon got used to live without my parents around.,taking,taken,to,living,2. 冠词,1)The blog serves as open platform where you can do lots of things. 2) There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. 3) You can never get the second chance to make a first impression. 4) At last, he was admitted to an university.,冠词包括 _ _ _ _ 注意：单数可数名词不特指用_, 不可数名词不特指用_特指都用_.元音因素前不定冠词是_, 固定短语搭配牢记。,a/an/the/X,a/an,the,an,考点2:,an,a,a,X,3. 名词,名词分为_名词和_名词。可数名词有_ 和_。 注意：单复数判断依据：_ _等 关注常见不可数名词，单复数同形的词，固定短语,可数,不可数,单数,复数,考点3:,谓语动词,名词前限定词,1) The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. 2) You cant imagine what difficulties we have remembering the new words. 3) A group of sheeps are eating grass and leaves at the foot of the hill. 4) My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.,years,sheep,difficulty,honesty,4. 形和副,形容词常做_语， _语， _语等 副词常修饰_ _ _ _注意：形容词变副词规则 ，形容词副词的比较级最高级。,考点4:,定 表 补,动词，副词，形容词及句子。,1)Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. 2)They were also the best and worse years in my life. 3) Much rare animals are dying out. 4) He works hardly to achieve his goal.,steadily,worst,Many,hard,5.代词,代词包含_ _ _ _ _,考点5:,人称, 物主, 反身,指示,不定代词,1) At first, I thought I could make decisions by yourself. 2) He borrowed the book I bought it yesterday. 3) Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. 4) They are three lessons in the morning.,myself,his,There,注意：1)代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误. 2) 不定代词或反身代词的误用. 3) it 特殊句式和形式主语宾语,6. 介词,介词：关注介词短语以及与其他词的搭配。,考点6:,1) He never dreams becoming rich. 2) Unfortunately, on the development of society, the environment has been polluted. 3) I carefully took down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forget.,of/about,with,7、连词,连词包括 _ 连词和_ 连词。 并列连词主要有_, 从属连词引导各类从句如_ _ _. 运用从句语法知识修改添加删除。,考点7:,并列,从属,and, but, or,so,定语从句,名词性从句,状语从句,1) While I arrived at the park, what came into sight were the thick green grass. 2) Randy was on the list of the 100 people had influenced the world in Times Magazine in 2007. 3) The trip to Lushan not only broadened my views, and also help to relax after a busy term.,When,who,but,8、语篇,1) ) Ive made up my mind to make every effort to study, so hard work is the key to success. 2) Tony saw a toy in a shop window A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. 3) Probably most people enjoy getting gifts from friends. Therefore, I feel much better about giving gifts.,考点8:,关注上下文，行文逻辑错误,because/ as,the,However,told,Task 4 Summary,an/an /the/X,Y,介词短语，固定搭配,Y,各种代词误用 /it,Y,并列连词从属连词(从句),Y,时态语态情态主谓一致,N /be可添加、删除,to do/ving./ved.,N/to do 的to 可添加、删除,转化规则比较级最高级,N,可数不可数单复数词性变化,N,1.规范性原则 2.四不改原则 3.四改动原则,Principles:,1)单词拼写不改 2) 大小写不改 3) 语序不改 4) 标点符号不改,遵循原义 同一词性同一考点不重复考察 以改动最少为原则 一对一原则,步骤1 浏览短文，弄清大意 改明显错误，标记语意不通之处 步骤2 逐句研读，逐行改错 步骤3 对照考点，逐词排除 步骤4 最后复查，有删有加,18,Four Steps to Follow:,19,Task 5: Practice Makes Perfect,Passage 1 (2015-2016 唐山三模 average：8.43 points) 以下是2016年唐山市三模考试中某学生的改错试卷，只改出7处错误，得分仅为7分，请运用改错出题原则及做题技巧帮她得到满分。,Dear Tom, Im glad to hear that you are coming for a holiday in our city the next month. Im such happy that you will stay in my house. There have been greatly changes in the last three year in my home. First, we have rebuilt your house, which now has four private rooms. You can choose any of them to live when you come. Second, my parents have set up a small restaurant in our village, that you can eat healthily. Im really willing to be your guide to make your journey interested and meaningful. If you had