2012广州一模读写,Reply to mothers letter,Dear David, I am writing you this email because youre so busy every day with your studies and after-school activities that we seldom have chances to talk face-to-face. There is something that I am very worried about. You have always been an active boy, willing to help others and always looking for an opportunity to try something new or learn something different. I think these are wonderful qualities but I am concerned that they may be affecting your studies. In the past three months alone you have joined at least four different student clubs. I see these activities taking up more and more of your time. Youre always discussing something with your classmates or surfing online. Youre also devoting less time to homework and even your teachers say you are looking very sleepy in class. I know that these kinds of activities are fun and can help your development, but I think they have started to damage your performance at school. Please remember the most important thing at this stage of your life is your studies. Right now you should do your best in your examinations as it will give you more choices is your future. I beg you to focus on your main goal and not to throw away all your years of hard work. Your loving mother,writing purpose,problem,bad effect & hope,There is something that I am very worried about. be concerned about You have joined at least four different student clubs. I see these activities taking up more and more of your time. be too absorbed in /spend too much on after-school activities participation in too many after-school activities I think they have started to damage your performance at school. I beg you to focus on your main goal . affect my study/ distract me from study hope that / ask sb to do sth urge me to concentrate on my study 督促我,checkpoints in summary: 存主去次重表达,人称： 时态: 格式： 字数,You , I,与原文一致,In your letter, you I learn from your letter that Ive just received your letter expressing,more checkpoints in summary:,不加个人感受 glad ,thankful,Dear mum, In your letter, you expressed your concern that I am being distracted from my studies because of my many after-school activities. So you urge me to fully concentrate on my study and do my best in the exam. Dear mum, Ive just received your letter expressing your concern about my participation in so many after-school activities and the effect of this on my study performance. You hope I can be more devoted to study,Mind Map,【写作内容】假设你是信中的 David，请用英语给你妈妈写回信。以下是回信的内容（信的开头和结 尾已经为你写好） ： 1. 以约 30 词概括书信的主要内容。 2. 以约 120 词谈谈你对参加学校社团或俱乐部活动的看法 内容包括: （1） 你读信后的感受； （2） 你是否赞成你妈妈的观点，并陈述理由； （3） 你对你妈妈的承诺。,1） 你读信后的感受；,I do appreciate /am grateful/ thankful for what you say/your suggestions from the bottom of my heart. I feel nothing but sorry/guilty/ashamed to have caused you so much worry. Im more than touched /moved that you understand my reasons for being attracted to such activities. I am extremely happy to have such a caring（关怀体贴的）/loving（关爱的）/ thoughtful/careful/ considerate mother. Only after reading your letter did I begin to reflect on my recent school life. It is not until then that I come to realize/Not until. Had it not been for your letter, I couldnt have known that ,Short as your letter is, I can strongly feel your love for me when you remind me that I should take measures to improve my studies in your letter. There is no denying that nobody is capable of（能够） loving me more than you do. Consequently, so grateful am I for your letter.,After I read your letter, it dawns on me that I have such a loving mother. I feel nothing but thankful for your instructive/ inspiring advice, which makes me reflect on my recent school life.,To be honest, I do feel ashamed because I have been so busy with my studies and after-school activities that we seldom have time sitting down, chatting, sharing our feelings as before. From your words, I can see your priceless love to me, which Im determined to take great pains to repay.,2） 你是否赞成你妈妈的观点，并陈述理由；,Having taken everything into careful consideration, I adopt a favorable attitude towards your view. From where I stand, what you say makes sense and I am in favor of it. To be frank, I disagree with/disapprove of your opinion.,语用角度：不得体，不符合语境,2） 你是否赞成你妈妈的观点，并陈述理由；,What you say is so convincing and reasonable that I cannot disapprove of it. Having considered/reflected my behavior and academic performance deeply , I accept your opinion/ suggestion that it is high time that I should focus on my academic performance more. Admittedly, it is your sincere words that convince me of the importance to study .,赞成主题句：,注重语境，不生搬硬套,2） 你是否赞成你妈妈的观点，并陈述理由；,Its true that I have been spending a lot of time with these groups but please dont worry. Reasonable as your suggestions seem, I dont totally agree with your opinion / I am inclined to disagree with you. Thankful as I am, I dont share the same opinion with you because the advantages of after-school activities far outweigh the disadva