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Unit 7Section Writing询问类电子邮件本单元的写作项目属于新课标中应用体类别中的询问类电子邮件。询问类电子邮件属于正式电子邮件,询问类电子邮件要清楚地说明要询问的内容,语言要简洁,态度要诚恳,格式要正确。正式电子邮件包括收件人地址、寄件人地址、邮件的主题、开头、正文、结束语和签名。. Prewriting()Learn to write after the model.From:To:enquiries*filmclub.comSubject:questions about the Youth Short Film Festival,I am writing to ask for information about entering a film in your festival! I am sixteen years old and I am a student at No.1 Senior Secondary School. I started making music videos three years ago. Last year, I made my first short film.,I would like to ask about the films for your festival. Do you accept sport documentaries? I am currently working on a sport documentary with a school friend. For the past few months, we have been interviewing and filming young players about their interest in basketball. Could you tell me if this kind of film would be acceptable? I wonder if you could also give me more information about how to apply for this festival. Can groups as well as individuals enter? Can we enter our film to another film festival at the same time? In addition, would it be possible to tell me about the prizes? Are there prizes for different age groups and for different types of films?,I appreciate your help and look forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,Liu Ze,篇章结构Senders address:.Recipients address:.Subject:The topic of the email Dear Sir/Madam,Greeting:Dear Sir/MadamThe first part:Explain why you are writing the email.The second part:detailed introduction of your inquiry contentsThe third part:ending and wishesSignature:Liu Ze()Preparation for writingWords and phrasesbe interested in对感兴趣be absorbed in 专注于go in for 参加;从事figure out 理解;弄清楚put forward 提出schedule n. 日程安排;时刻表have fun with 玩得开心exchange greetings 互致问候date back to 追溯到;远在年代look forward to 期望,期待by this means 以这种方式make a breakthrough 取得突破seminar n. 专题研讨会tutor n. 家庭教师;导师this term 这学期. Whilewriting假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封电子邮件,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.参考词汇:住宿accommodation。Step 1List the outline of the passage1地址寄件人地址收件人地址信件主题2正文称呼语:Dear Sir/Madam首段:说明写邮件的原因(想询问暑假英语课程的情况)中段: 询问的内容尾段:结束并提出希望签名:Li HuaStep 2List the words, phrases and sentences.1Words and phrasesattend a summer school参加暑期学校sixweek English course 六周的英语课程during the vacation 在假期期间advertisement n. 广告accommodation_ n. 住宿pay for 为付钱host family 寄宿家庭dormitory n. 学生宿舍would like 想要;愿意look forward to 渴望;盼望;期待2Sentences我是一名中国学生,我计划在假期去英国上一所暑期学校。(and连接并列句)I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.我还想知道我要付多少学费,是否包括住宿。(宾语从句)Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Step 3Draft the article by using the following words.From:To:enquiries*sixweekenglishcourse.comSubject:questions about the Youth Short Film FestivalDear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Ive seen your advertisement, and Id like to know something more about your sixweek English course.First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua. Postwritingpolishing the passageExchange your passage with your partner and pay attention to the following points:1. Is the format of the email right?2. Are there any spelling mistakes?3. Are there any grammar mistakes?4. Does the email include all the main contents?5. Are advanced and complex sentences used correctly?6.Is the writing written properly and clearly?亮点表达精彩开头语1Im happy/glad/pleased to receive your email dated by May 1st.很高兴收到你五一发来的电子邮件。2Im writing to thank you for your help during my stay in England.我写这封信是为了感谢我在英国时你对我的帮助。3Im sorry not to answer/reply to your email in time because I have been busy these days.很抱歉没有及时回复你的电子邮件,因为这些日子我一直很忙。4Im sorry to learn that you did not do well in the entrance examination.得知你在入学考试中发挥不好,我很难过。5Im glad to receive your e-mail saying that you have been offered a good job in a big company. Congratulations to you.我很高兴收到你的邮件,邮件中说你被一家大公司聘用了,祝贺你。6I have been missing you a lot since we met last time.自从我们上次见面以来,我一直很想你。7How are you getting on with your English study?你英语学得怎么样了?8I am sorry for not writing to you sooner.很抱歉没有早点给你写信。精彩结尾语1In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.最后,如果你发现我的建议有用我会非常高兴。2Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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