Welcome!,clear your plate campaign,社会现象类开放作文指导,近来，“光盘行动”悄然流行， 这一行动引导崇尚节约，反对浪费的社会风气。其实在我们的校园生活中也存在一些浪费现象。请给校长写一封信，信的内容应该包括： （1）简述几个浪费现象 （2）就这些现象谈谈你的看法 （3）你的建议 注意： 1. 文中不得透露个人的姓名和学校名称。 2. 词数为120字左右。（开头已写好，不计入总词数）,Dear Mr.Headmaster， I am Li Yue，a student from Class 1，Senior 2.Im writing to draw your attention to wasting on campus among us students ,D,Difficulties:,How to describe a phenomenon?,What to write about(ideas) ?,How to make suggestions?,How to describe a phenomenon?,近来，“光盘行动”悄然流行， 这一行动引导崇尚节约，反对浪费的社会风气。其实在我们的校园生活中也存在一些浪费现象。请给校长写一封信，信的内容应该包括： （1）简述几个浪费现象 （2）就这些现象谈谈你的看法 （3）你的建议,Be a question man,校园生活中,Be an observer,Plate? School? How describe discuss A B terms,some students the paper and throw it away easily.Whats more, many a student spends much money buying unnecessary items.In addition, I see a number of students walking while eating, and they throw rubbish along the way. Whats worse,On one day,I Jack eat up his food on the plate, and I told him,“Jack, dont waste!” But he replied “Dont worry, I treat,saw,didnt,“Jack, dont waste!”,“Dont worry, I treat you!”.,didnt cherish,eat up,told,replied,Tips on how to describe a phenomenon, 描述与主题相关的现象，不要偏题。, 常见现象的描述用一般现在时态（the present tense），请根据实际情况保持时态一致, 在描述现象时，最好不用直接引语(direct speech)，尽量转化为间接引语(indirect speech)或客观描述。,Be a question man,Be an observer,What to write about(ideas) ?,近来，“光盘行动”悄然流行， 这一行动引导崇尚节约，反对浪费的社会风气。其实在我们的校园生活中也存在一些浪费现象。请给校长写一封信，信的内容应该包括： （1）简述几个浪费现象 （2）就这些现象谈谈你的看法 （3）你的建议,Causes and effects repeat,What to write about(ideas) ?,Bad effects or consequences,Causes of the phenomenon,Be a thinker,Be a reader,What are Contribute to,Look at the following sentences about bad effects on campus, choose the right sentences which can be properly put in the blank in the passage.,a. it makes some students dependent on their parents for money, which is harmful to their development b. my friend likes to spend money on many luxury things,and I think he wastes much money from his parents.c. as we all know, resource is limited. If every one of us forms the bad habit of wasting, then we will not have a bright future.d. when food is thrown away, it becomes rubbish which smells bad.e. so we must save much paper and water.f. However, being wasteful is a bad habit that, like a drug, gradually ruins a human beings virtures. Once a person grows wasteful, he will lead a improper life.,The negative effects of waste can be shown in the following aspects. First of all, wasting means not only wasting money but wasting precious resources. In addition, If they dont learn to support themselves, they will be “useless people” when they graduate. Last but not the least, thrift is a traditional Chinese virtue for us students.,c.as we all,know, resource is limited.If every one of us forms the bad habit of wasting, then we will not have a bright future.,a.it makes some students dependent on their parents for money, which is harmful to their development.,f. However, being wasteful is a bad habit that, like a drug, gradually ruins a human beings virtues. Once a person grows wasteful, he will lead a improper life.,resource,resources,virtue,virtues,Tips on What to write about,先确定自己对这一类社会现象的态度,分析出现这种现象的原因 或阐述这种现象可能带来的影响或后果,陈述时 着重这一类现象的影响而不是某种个别事例的影响 确定好每一类影响的关键词,Be a thinker,Be a reader,How to make suggestions?,近来，“光盘行动”悄然流行， 这一行动引导崇尚节约，反对浪费的社会风气。其实在我们的校园生活中也存在一些浪费现象。请给校长写一封信，信的内容应该包括： （1）简述几个浪费现象 （2）就这些现象谈谈你的看法 （3）你的建议,Be a writer,Be an editor,Its your turn. NEXT ppt talk the rules,As far as I am concerned, its high time that we fought against wasting.On one hand,On the other hand,Only through these measures can we,Suggestions about how to stop wasting,Our school should carry out various activities to arouse students awareness of saving.,Relevant rules and regulations are supposed to be made to punish those who waste things。,We should form the habit of saving from now on. It is everybodys duty to save resources,Im determined to call on more schoolmates to fight against waste,One possible version,As far as I am concerned, its high time that we fought against wasting.On one hand, Our school should carry out various activities to arouse students awareness of saving. On the other hand, We students should form the habit of saving from now on. It is everybodys duty to save resources. Only through these measures can we hope to reduce waste on campus.,Tips on how to make suggestions,尽可能多地想出不同方面的建议,将所有的建议汇总后，根据性质将这些建议分成两到三个类别,找出每一类别的共同点，提出适当的建议。,Be a writer,Be an editor,We should form the habit of saving from now on. It is everybodys duty to save resources,Im determined to call on more schoolmates to fight against waste,Each of us should start from our own behavior, and pass the saving spirit from individual to individual！,