书面表达真题精选（续） 西安市 王海峰 XI. 书面表达(共 1 题；满分 15 分) （2010常州） 假设某美国教育代表团将来你校参观访问，请你根据下表提示的信息，用英语向外宾 简单介绍学校近年来所发生的变化，并谈谈你的感想。 过去 现在 环境及设 施 至少列举两例说明过去情况 操场更大、篮球场更多；图书新、品种多； 树木四季常青，学校美如花园 你的感想 注意： 1词数不少于 90 。文章的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 2要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。 3文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。 【分析】本节任务是通过新旧对比向外宾介绍学校发生的巨变，是典型的叙事性文体。但 此文章又不同于常见的记录“一次性活动”的叙事性文章，而是和收录于上文的 VI.（2010眉山）的试题一样，都是将过去和现在巧妙地结合在了一起。 One possible version Ladies and gentlemen! Its my honor to tell you about the changes to our school. In the past, there was only a small playground. The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them. The number of the trees and flowers was small. But things have greatly changed these years. Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts. More different kinds of new books can be lent to us. Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round. I think its lucky of us to have such good studying environment. We will work harder and serve the people better in the future. I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much! XII.书面表达 ( 共 1 题；满分 10 分) （2010通化） 假如你是 Daniel。请你根据下面的提示内容，给你的笔友 Kitty 写一封电子邮件，向她倾述你的烦恼，并请求她的帮助。词数要求：80 词。 （10 分） 1. 着迷于网上聊天，并花费很多时间； 2. 经常回家很晚，不能按时交作业； 3. 父母和老师不喜欢这样，要我放弃这个爱好； 4. 为此常感到有压力，也不知怎么办才好，希望给出一些建议。 【分析 】本节书面表达和收录于上文的 VIII.（2010宿迁） 神似。虽然也是写信，但实 则是想通过考查考生的叙事能力来达到检测其 书面表达能力 的目的 。根据提示信息可 以判定通篇要使用一般现在时。 前三点平铺直叙即可，但第四点表达请求的语气应该婉 转，如 Id like to have your advice.等。 Dear Kitty, How time flies! I havent seen you for a long time. I am in trouble now. Could you help me with my problem? I love chatting on the Internet. I spend a lot of time talking with others so I go home late every night. Im too tired to do my homework and I cant hand it in on time. Both my teachers and parents dont like me to do so. They hope I can give it up. I feel stressed and dont know what to do. Could you give me some advice? Please write to me soon. Best wishes, XIII.书面表达(共 1 题；满分 15 分) （2010北京） 假设你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你收到他的来信。请给托尼写一封回信， 回答他的问题，介绍北京良好的公交服务，并谈谈你的感受。 Hi! Liu Jing, My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he has heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself. He says the bus service in Beijing is very good now, and people can to anywhere by bus. Is he right? Can you tell me something more about it? Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Tony 根据任务提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于 60 词的回信，信 的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 【分析】本文是一篇半开放式的作文，和（2008陕西）书面表达创意相同。它的信息提 示的载体是一份英语书信。因此，细读理出来信要问的问题是写作的重要环节。One possible version Hi! Tony ，Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing. Your grandpa is right. The bus service in Beijing is really good now. There are bus lines all over Beijing and buses can even take you to a small village. Besides, special seats are offered on buses. People do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap. I like taking a bus because I think its comfortable and also good for the environment. So its a good choice for your grandpa to travel by bus in Beijing. If you have more questions ，please ask me. Yours,Liu Jing XIV. 书面表达（共 1 小题；满分 20 分） （2010安徽）假定你叫张华，最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂，请给该公司 写封电子邮件。要点如下：表示欢迎：有利于家乡发展等；感到担忧：造成环境污染等；希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。注意：1词数 80100；2请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；3邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 One possible version Dear Sir or Madam,I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us support the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the surrounding area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection. Would you please offer us more information about it? Im looking forward to hearing from you.XV. 书面表达 （共 1 小题；满分 15 分） （2010宁夏） 【计划安排题材】 假定你是赵方，今年暑假你将和父母一起去上海参观世博园，火车票已买好。请根据 下表信息给你在上海的好友 Jenny 写一封信，告知她你们的行程安排，并与她约定一个见 面的时间。字数：80 词左右。信的首尾句已给出，不计入总词数。 日期 活动内容 7 月 15 日 从银川出发 7 月 17 日 到达上海，入住江天宾馆（距世博园约四公里） 7 月 18-19 日 参观世博园 7 月 20 日 返回银川 参考词汇: 世博园 the pavilions of the World ExpoDear Jenny ， Ive got good news to tell you. This summer vacation my parents and I will go to Shanghai to visit the pavilions of the World Expo. We have already bought the train tickets. We will leave Yinchuan on July 15 and arrive in Shanghai on July 17. We will stay in Jiangtian Hotel which is about 4 kilometers away from the pavilions. During the next two days we will visit the pavilions. We plan to return to Yinchuan on July 20. I will be free on the evening of July 19. Can we meet then? I am looking forward to seeing you.Yours,Zhao Fang-the end.