【写作辅导】大学英语四六级考试作文闪光点 排行榜 收藏 打印 发给朋友 举报 来源：本站原创 发布者：webmaster 热度 49 票 【共 0 条评论】【我要评论】 时间：2010 年 8 月 18 日 14:17 作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本 的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使 你的作文如虎添翼!高分作文标志:1 ：是否长短句交叉;2 、是否会使用插入语;3 、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使 用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词; 5 、句型使用 是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用 we / I (比 如写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to 而用 Attention should be paid to. ) 举 个经典结尾 2004 年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so ，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、 动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如 however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动 词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现 good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion 等等) 比如上面例子中，applicable 替换 proper, approaches 替 换 ways, implement 替换 carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge 替换 enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14 分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各 类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文 有了很大的提高。Computer and I ( By Simmy )沪江I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 verythrilling 替换 excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.google 替换 searchan army of 替换 a lot ofThe dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期 发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popularCoincident with 非常地道的句型，表达“与 一致”的意思，替换 With Advancement 替换 developmentPour into ( flood into / swarm into ) 替换 enter intoCurrent ( currently ) 替换 nowAppeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的 沪江四六级For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin withWe can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动Additionally 替换 In addition / BesidesDeliver 替换 send There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,*, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先 There is no denying that 这个句型，还有 however 作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm toEmerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing )Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sidesComputers do play ，do 强调Positive 替换 important / good 等A slice of 替换 a part ofUnfavorable 替换 badImpacts 替换 effects / influencesWe should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入语Fruits (而且 fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect以下是 30 个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下:1.individuals,characters, folks 替换(people ,persons)2: positive, favorable, rosy ( 美好的)，promising(有希望的) ，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior 替换 good3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill ( 有害的) 替换 bad如果 bad 做表语，可以有 be less impressive 替换eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 沪江四六级4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换 many.注：用 many, if not most 一定要小心，many 后一定要有词。Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用 most, if not all ,替换 most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several 替换 some6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,hold the view that, it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that) 替 think(因为是书面语，所以要加 that)7:affair ,business ,matter 替换 thing8: shared 代 common9.reap huge fruits 替换 get many be