小宝老师新托福写作 1 小宝老师新托福写作笔记 写作目标：写作目标：25 scores 达到目标的方法： A.题型的归纳1、 综合性写作： Reading+ Listening+ Writing （Write about the RELATION of reading and listening） 2、独立性写作：185 个作文题库，强调个性化的内容 和个性化的语言 B更高级的语言与更高级的逻辑等（GRE Important-influential, profound, crucial, essential, vital, significant, play a key role; Show-reflect, confirm, reveal, convey, imply, indicate, demonstrate, illustrate; More and more-A growing trend involves, _ be on the rise, people in increasing numbers, A growing number; Most-the vast majority of, universally, commonly, generally, widely, the considerable proportion Of; 句子的生动性：句子的生动性：Without art, a society can survive but can never thrive.（押韵修辞） 句子的变化性句子的变化性 引例：The horses were grazing peacefully on the farm. They were unaware of the approaching hunter. (1)Grazing peacefully on the farm, the horses were unaware of the approaching hunter. (2)The horses were grazing peacefully on the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (3)As the horses grazed peacefully on the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. 小宝老师新托福写作 3 独立性写作八大论证功能段落独立性写作八大论证功能段落 1、对比观点的引出段 When it refers to (TOPIC), people opinions are divergent on such a controversial issue. The overwhelming majority would support that (主流观点); Others, however, take the negative attitude. 2、个人观点的引出段 A. From the personal perspective, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. B. To choose A or B is something of a dilemma, to the public, because they are always confused by the seemingly good qualities of A but neglect the genuinely profound aspects of B. 3、原因概述功能段落 Among countless factors which directly or indirectly influence _, there are several conspicuous factors as follows. 4、原因列举功能段落 A. At the risk of sounding too simplistic, my main proposition can be summarized in one saying that _. B. Another equally essential factor why I advocate _relates to _. C. Beyond all these obvious reason mentioned above, however, lies a deeper one _. 5、利弊分析功能段落 However, _ serves as a double-edged sword, in other words, the inferiorities of _ coexist its superiorities. 6、例证功能段落引出 History is replaced with evidence to demonstrate this point, a case in point has an association with SB in the realm of _. 7、趋势影响分析功能段落 Undoubtedly,_ will give rise to a multitude of positive/negative effects _ in the foreseeable future. 8、结论 From what I have discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that _. 托福写作必备四大类论证句型归纳托福写作必备四大类论证句型归纳 一、表达某个事物重要、必要 1.否定词+比较级-Nothing be adj(er) than to do e.x. Nothing is more important than to receive education. 没有什么比接受教育更加重要的了。 小宝老师新托福写作 4 2. We cannot Verb Noun too much-再也不为过 e.x. We cannot emphasize the value of writing too much. 我们再强调写作的价值也不为之过。 3. It pays to be/do sth in a long term-sth 至关重要 e.x. It pays to be honest in a long term. 诚信很重要。 二、大众观点的引出 1. It is conceivable that -显然的（表现观点很客观） 弱 2. It goes without saying that -不言而喻的 3. It is self-evidence that -不言而喻的 4. It is universally acknowledged that -众所周知的 5.It is indisputable that 无可辩驳的 强 三、表示关联、关系的句式结构 1. has an association with 2. has a bearing on 3. be closely related to 四、建议措施的引出 1. spare no efforts to 2. do ones utmost to 3. pour more investment into 4. bring home to sb sth. 托福写作段落的构造原则托福写作段落的构造原则：因果解释、问题解决、观点论证 托福写作段落的扩展方法：例证、引用、类比、对比、定义、反证 结构体系：TS -SS1 -SS2 -SS3 (CS) 1、因果解释型论证体系：现象引出原因分析结果分析 Currently, 抽象事物 has loomed up wide public concern. What amazes us most is that 具体事物. (趋势化) It is true that the trend of this is seemingly on the rise in all walks of life. (原因解释化) We may cite a variety of reasons accounting for this. The major ones can be listed as follows. First and foremost, _ play a pushing role. In addition, _. Last but not least, _. (结果化)As a consequence, _. 段落举例：Juvenile delinquency 青少年犯罪 Nowadays, juvenile delinquency has become a focal point under discussion. What amazes us most is that the forms of juvenile delinquency vary from stealing, robbing to murdering. It is true that the trend of this is on the rise. We may cite a variety of reasons accounting for this 小宝老师新托福写作 5 adolescent crime. First and foremost, the mass media plays a key role, in other words, children are frequently exposed to shows and reports about crime and violence. In addition, children in China are often pampered and spoiled by their parents. Last but not least, todays children have to face a more tempting world than ever before. As a consequence, they are prone to commit crimes. ASSIGNMENT: “Generation gap” 2、问题解决型论证体系：描述现状建议措施 With the advancement of modern society, _ has become a social problem of public concern. Meanwhile, it has given rise to a series of other matters, such as A and B. So it is