行知中学 2010 届高三作文备考 11观点论证型观点论证型：此类作文往往要求考生根据题目给出论点，按照提纲的结构要求对其下论证，然后表明自己的立场和看法。通过摆事实、讲道理的方式剖析事物，论述事理，发表意见，确立或否认某一主张。议论文的表达方式以议论为主，叙事说明为辅。一般具备论点，论据，和论证三大要素。该体型考题提出一种观点，通常会要求考生对此观点进行论证。较为常见的方式是在第二段要求考生举出具体的例子来说明这一观点，即我们常说的例证法。而在第三段中，又往往会要求考生表明自己的态度、做法，在日常生活中有效的实践这一观点，或要求考生给出最佳的实践方法。因为所有的段落都以某个观点为核心展开，所以我们称之为观点论证型试题。I 真题呈现：2005 年 上海秋季高考作文：古人云：“天生我材必有用” （There must be a use for my talent.）请你描述你生活中的一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。 There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent. I have regarded it as my motto for many years. From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another. With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society.When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road. He didnt have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture. Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them.To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us. The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood.From this old man, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display it. The most important factor is your confidence. If you believe that there must be a use for my talent, you will succeed. II作文模式：行文模式：观点提出观点论证观点总结模版 1：Para1. Many people believe that 社会现象 /事实现象。The truth is deep and profound.As we know, 具体表现一。In addition, 具体表现二。Para2. 观点论证There are numerous examples supporting this argument. 行知中学 2010 届高三作文备考 22A case in point is 阐述第一个例子。This is close to suggest 观点正确性For another example, 引出并说明第二个例子。Moreover, 阐述第三个例子。Para3. 观点总结All mentioned above tell us that 重申观点。But ( one thing we have to notice is that ) 。In short, 总结全文。模版 2： As a saying goes, /There is a famous proverb that/ Some people hold that /is widely accepted today./ is a very nice piece of wisdom. - 直接提出本文的观点 .There is no denying that - 进一步强调观点的正确性 If , . If not . - 正反论述 There are numerous examples supporting this argument -承上启下 Take as an example. -举例一具体论证This is close to suggest -总结例一For another example, -举例二具体论证 . All mentioned above tell us/Judging from the evidences offered，we might safely draw the conclusion that -总结上文，重申论点 .模板 2 具体可以表述为：开始段：提出观点。中间段：对观点进行论证，包括理论论证和事例论证。结尾段：总结观点或表示个人决心或提出具体做法。 这一模板主要适用于分析论证具体的观点这一类型作文的写作。在许多考试中出现的话题如：温室里的花朵经不起风雨; 终点即是新起点; 自信 成功的关键因素之一 等作文都适用于这种模板。其他可以使用此模板的话题还有对个人言论正确与否的论证，以及包括对名言警句、哲理、谚语等的论证。III、仿真试题你怎样理解“有志者事竟成”，试举例说明。IV、范文展示Where There Is a Will, There Is a way(1) Many people believe that the proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way”.(2) The truth is deep and profound. (3) As we know, as long as a person possesses a strong will，he will certainly accomplish a task no matter how difficult it is.(4) In addition, if he persists, he will eventually 行知中学 2010 届高三作文备考 33succeed.(5) There are numerous examples supporting this argument. (6) A case in point is that Karl Marx, who spent five years on his greatest work Das Kapital, won the respect from the people all over the world. (7) This is close to suggest that a strong will is a vital factor to ones final success. (8) For another example, Cao Xueqin met lots of hardships in his pursuit for literature, but finally completed his world famous book Dreams of Red Chamber. (9) Moreover, among us senior high school students, those who persist studying hard and make it eventually also are good examples.(10) All mentioned above tell us that if we wish to succeed, we must first have a resolution and remember the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way.” (11) But one thing we have to notice is that a strong will must be accompanied by a right direction, which shouldnt be blind. (12) In short, whatever you do, please remember: Where there is a will, there is a way.V、自我测试1有一首歌中唱道“Dont let no small frustration ever bring you down. Just take a situation and turn it all around! With a new attitude, everything can change.的确，你的生活终究应该有你来掌握（Life is what you make it.） 。遭遇挫折时，消极逃避还是积极面对，你的态度往往会决定一切。请结合你生活中的一件事说明此道理。2俗话说：“孰能生巧” （ Practice Makes Perfect）请你描述你生活中的一件或两件事，说明此道理。 3. 有一句谚语说：与其选择财富，不如选择好名声。 （A Good Name Is Rather to Be Chosen Than Riches）请结合你生活中的某件事例，谈谈你的感悟。例文 1: The famous saying “Practice makes perfect” is widely accepted today. The truth is deep and profound. It means if we practice unfamiliar things again and again, well be able to perform it perfectly. The practice of learning English is a good example. We are not living in an English speaking country. So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners. Only sitting at the desk cannot lead to the mastery of English. Fo