特：特：幸福感How to Enhance the Sense of Happiness1. 人们对于如何提升幸福感有不同看法2. 幸福感提升不仅包含物质层面，也指。The sense of happiness is of great significance. As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future. However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it.In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also refers to several others aspects. Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individuals admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love. Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness. It is health that enables them to build up a solid foundation for anything significant.As a college student, I am convinced that never can money equal happiness. To enhance our sense of happiness, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich their knowledge, broaden their horizon and cultivate their ability.针对购物狂欢过度消费问题针对购物狂欢过度消费问题My View on Over-ConsumptionSome people are in favor of the idea of over-consumption. They point out the fact that Chinas rapid economic development has materially enriched the lives of ordinary Chinese people, and at the same time increased our demands as consumers. They also argue that the rising consumption helps drive economic growth.However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to consume more than what their family can afford. They firmly point out that the dogged pursuit for more accounts for our debts, anxiety, waste and overload. An example can back up this arguement: The American financial crisis caused by over consumption made the people of the world worse off.There is some truth in both arguements. But I think the disadvantages of over-consumption outweigh the advantages. In addititon to the above-mentioned negative effects, the surging consuming demand threatens to exhaust our resources and spoil our environment.To conclude, our government is advocating ideas of “conservation-minded society“ and sustainable development. Whether due to sense of guilt about waste, or a simple desire to save money, we need to promote sustainable consumption.1.1. 20122012 年年 6 6 月英语六级作文点评：巧合与必然月英语六级作文点评：巧合与必然As is depicted in the cartoon, the girl, instead of answering her dad directly, tells her father to read her blog when asked about her performance in school.正如四、六级委员会主任杨慧中在一篇文章中所指出的那样，“对图表数据写得越细致的考生得分有越低的倾向”，我认为一般考生不宜于对漫画做过与细致的描写。以往的经验告诉我们，很多初学者可以来几句笼统的因果分析，却很难写几句具体的描写，这就是为什么 2004 年的四级作文“描写一个旅游景点”被考生视为史上最难得原因。文章的重点还是主体段落的因果分析。如这次四级作文“过度包装”的中间部分就可以同时分析这种现象的原因和影响。但这次的六级作文明确要求写“impact”。大家知道，影响可以有正反之分。其实，这道题和 2009 年的考研写作“网络的近与远”如出一辙。所不同者：考研作文中的图画中我们看到的不是父女对答，而是无数人类都在一张巨大的蛛网上忙碌。可谓异曲同工。其实，四、六级作文与考研题目的巧合远非这一次。2009 年的考研写作中的书信写作主题就和 2008 年四级作文“On Disposable Products”完全相同。某种程度上，巧合是一种必然。2011 年 12 月四、六级写作主题“Strong Will Is the Key to Success” 就是我们四级写作教材第十三篇范文“The Way to Success”。这次的六级考试作文题目又和我们四级教材第三十篇范文“The Internet”完全相同。一下是教材原文：Owing to the speedy economic development, the number of people who use the Internet has considerably increased. It is universally acknowledged that the Internet plays a crucial role in modern society.Due attention has to be paid to the issue of the Internet. With the reform and opening-up in recent decades, people in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of the Internet. Unfortunately, if we let this situation continue as it is, we do not know where humans will be in the forthcoming future.Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. To begin with, we should appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to control the Internet. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of people that the Internet is essential to us. Only in this way can we solve the problem.当然这篇文章有它的缺憾：空洞。但空洞的文章也有一个“好处”：稍加增减就可以“变身”为一篇同样题材的新作。实际上，这篇文章字数 138，作为六级作文字数稍短。增加一点网络交流的影响就是一篇高分作文。那么，增加什么呢？这很简单。在我们的课堂中，会分门别类的介绍各种题材的相关内容。如科技类话题的：Instead of waiting weeks for a letter, we can “talk” with our friends at every corner of the world thanks to the advent of the Internet. Unfortunately, while facilitating communication, this new invention also alienates people because, when we are attracted by the virtual world, we are likely to be left with less time to stay with people in the real world.这样的观点，不仅讨论“网络交流”可以用，考到其他科技话题也可以用。这样，当我们就各种主题都积累一些材料以后，考题的“巧合”就成为“必然”。 2. 范文二：The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal CommunicationAs is described in the picture, a father asks her daughter how her school today goes on. Instead of answering directly, the daughter tells her father to read her blog. It is common that youngsters nowadays incline to communicate with others on internet increasingly, and lack communication with people around them. With the development of Internet, it has influenced our society to a large extent, especi