精题分解：精题分解：2010 届高三各地模拟题短文改错汇编（届高三各地模拟题短文改错汇编（2） （复习类）（复习类） （27 篇）篇） 1 （2010陕西省西安市五校高三二模） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改。 增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号（） ，并在其下面写出修改的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者（从 11 处起）不计分。 Grandma Moses was crazy about painting soon before she picked it up and worked hard at itShe painted careful and her works were niceShe first painted only to please oneself, and then began to sell her works with a little moneyIn 1993, a collector, Louis Caldor happen to see several of Grandma Moses work hanging in a shopHe liked them, buying them at once, and set out to look for lessCaldor held a show to introduce the works of Grandma Moses other artistsGrandma Moses, who was world-famous, was died on December 13, 1961, at the age of 101 2 （2010陕西西工大附中高三第五次适应性训练） All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect ” It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we should practise, and one day we will make itIts easy to understandOnce I wanted to learn swimmingAt first I found difficult to control my bodyI just sank into the waterI feel very frightenedThen I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeedI went to the swimming pool every day, learned from them and practisedA day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming poo1, I sudden found that I could swimHow exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than before 3 （2010浙江杭州高三二模） In order to make best of learning materials, the Students Union of our school is planning an activity. The school leavers are called on to give away our used books, newspapers or magazines to the student in the lower grades. The idea, that is intended to promote friendship and encourage a low carbon lifestyle, are highly praised and supported by the teachers and students alike. The activity will be hold on the first floor of the school library and so it will last eleven days, from June 10 to 20. as student, I am strong for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. I hope that this kind of activity would continue every year for the future. 4 （2010陕西西安市阎良区高三测试题） My classmate, Hanks, have been sick in hospital for a week. Yesterday our class decided send him some flowers and asked me to buy the flowers. I have had a hard time get them since then. I went to town immediate after class yesterday afternoon only to find the flowers shop there already closed. So I returned with nothing. I called it many times at this morning, but the line was always busy. While I finally got through at noon, a lady said she was a new hand and can not tell me the prices. Luckily, I havent classes this afternoon, and I am about go to town again. I must get the flowers for Hanks today. 5 （2010浙江省宁波高三二模） Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. One Monday morning , when she entered the classroom, we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said they shouldnt call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. Late, she let us go to the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turn. When it was my turn, I felt too shy that I didnt dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, “Dont be afraid. I believe you can do well.” At last, I went to the blackboard. She praised me for that I had done. 6 （2010浙江绍兴高三一模） Im a senior 3 student who take the College Entrance Exam soonNow I have a problem in choosing my majorMy parents want me to study international businessTherefore，my head teacher suggests that I chose software engineeringAs for me，I have a total different idea from themI want to take environmental science for my major so that I can use that I have learned to help improving the environment in my hometown after the graduationBut can I possibly make a decision on my own against the will of my parents and my teacher? Im writing to you for my opinionWould you please spare some time to give me some advices?7 （2010东北三省三校高三第二次联合模拟考试） Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “Theres a bum(流浪汉)in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb. 8 （2010辽宁大连高三第一次模拟考试） Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the bestHowever, it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice