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智 课 网 托 福 备 考 资 料2016年1月9日托福写作预测2016年1月9日托福写作预测,智课外语托福写作名师文静老师整 理,供考生们参考。文章整理了两篇托福写作文章题目及范文,希望对 考生们备考1月托福写作有所帮助。 题目1:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. 审题:拿到这个题目,我们会发现题目当中有个明显的绝对词mos t, 类似的绝对词还有best, only等,如果这个题目没有用这么绝对的表 达,那么我们可以写成同意,但是如果出现了绝对词,那么建议同学们 写成不同意。如果题目中说在ABC中A最大,假设我们不同意这种说法 ,那么有可能出现以下这些情况,CAB,BAC,CA=B,C=AB,C= A=B,今天给大家介绍的是写成C=A=B这种方式,类似于小时候别人问 你,你是喜欢爸爸还是喜欢妈妈,想必大部分同学会回答一样喜欢。开头段:开头段我们需要做三件事情:改写题目+亮明自己的观点 +理由如下,针对此题目,具体写出来就是这样,Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally, I disagree with the idea that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career, because I believe that other factors are equally important. To verify the validity of my perspective, I will give some solid reasons. 主体段1:在第一个主体段中,我们可以先肯定下salary确实是人们 在choosing jobs时候的重要考虑因素,那么主体段我们采用的写法是 先写出中心句,再针对中心句进行展开,展开时候我们主要使用说因果 以及做对比的方法。具体写出来就是这样: On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs. For example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Most people consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or othernon-financial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and raise a family. 主体段2:在接下去的一个主体段中,我们可以找一下有没有哪些 因素也是人们在选择工作时候的重要考虑因素,并且我们在写的时候就 写成这些因素跟salary是同等重要的,大家不必在这写成其他因素更加 重要,一旦写成更加重要,那我我们又需要进行对比,写成同等重要, 既避免掉这一步,因此我们可以写在选择工作时候,跟salary同等重要 的还有很多,包括工作氛围,成就感,能否为社会做出积极贡献等等, 具体写出来就是这样:Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely important when choosing a job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for example, can make a huge difference to workers levels of happiness and general quality of life. Secondly, many peoples feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn. Finally, some people choose a career because they want to help others and contribute something positive to society. 结尾段:在结尾段我们只需要重申下自己的总观点即可,写出来就 是这样, To put it into a nutshell, based on the reasons above, we can finally reach a conclusion that while salaries certainly affect peoples choice of profession, I do not believe that money outweighs all other motivators. 题目2:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the best way to teach children to cooperate with others is through team sports at school. 托福写作范文:It is argued by some people that the team sport in school is the best approach for children to learn how to collaborate with other people. For me, I disagree with this statement, because I think other ways are as good as team sports. To verify the validity of my perspective, I will give some solid reasons. There is no denying the fact that the team sport is a good choice to give children the sense of cooperation. Children need to cooperate with their peers or their classmates closely, if they want to achieve the final success in many team sports in school, such as basketball or relay race, instead of working alone. In the long term, teenagers can be someone of cooperative spirit who pays attention to collaboration with others.However, there are also other methods which can give children the sense of cooperation. Firstly, children can learn cooperation through group work. Teachers can assign some group work about some academic subject, and as students have different advantages, they can take on some tasks accordingly. Female students who do things carefully can be responsible for collecting data and giving a presentation, while those male students who are adept at logical thinking can analyze the data collected by female students. Plus, joining clubs in school can also cultivate the ability to cooperate with others. There are many social activities which are available in school. By joining these activities, such as looking after homeless seniors or advocating people to protect the environment, teenagers need to cooperate with their group members to achieve the goal, which can also foster their awareness of responsibility. To put it into a nutshell, we can clearly see that while the team sport is a choice to give children the sense of collaboration, other methods are just as effective as the team sport.
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