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增强书面表达增强书面表达 效果的技巧效果的技巧全国高考书面表达的评分标准:-覆盖所有主要内容;-应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽 力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备 较强的语言运用能力。-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文 结构紧凑;完全达到了预期的写作目的。第五档(很好)(2125分)上海高考 写作评分标准:1、本题总分为25分,其中内容10分,语言10分,组织结构5分。 2、评分时应注意内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性以及上下文的连贯性。 3、评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次,然后对照相应的组织结构档次给予加分。其中,内容和语言两部分相加,得15分或以上者,可考虑加 4 - 5分,15分以下者只能考虑加 0- 3分。4、词数少于70,总分最多不超过10分。技 巧1. 使用较高级的词汇3. 使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的 多少,也是衡量英语水平 的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以 给文章增色不少,从而使 整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词,对写一 篇有“英语味”的文章很重 要,能使文章上下衔接自 然、紧凑。增强书面表达增强书面表达 效果的技巧效果的技巧2. 使用较丰富的句式一、使用较高级的词汇1、这件工作挺难的。2、最后他了解到了所有的事情。3、感谢你不辞辛苦地帮助我。That is a difficult job. challenging/ demandingHe learned about everything at last. eventuallyI should thank you for taking so much trouble to help me. I am awfully grateful to you for4. 几天前,我碰巧遇到了一个老朋友。5. 努力使我们的生活变得更好。 We try our best to make our life better. Several days ago, I happened to meet an old friend of mine. A couple of days ago, I came across/ bumped into/ stumbled on an old friend of mine. / (, it so happened that I ran into )make every effort to make unremitting/ joint efforts to spare no effort to better our life 像access, available, annoyed, appealing, charming, cute, confused, contact, challenging, considerably, consequently, demanding, essential, exceptional, fascinated, locate, participate, quit, significant, schedule, terrific, 等单词, 均可视作高级词汇。1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2. We all think he is a great man.3. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.Thanks to/ Owing to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.We all think highly of him.A good idea occurred to me. Or: A good idea suddenly struck me.PracticeOr: I hit on/ upon a good idea.4. Shanghai lies in the east of China.5. As a result, the plan was a failure.6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.7. A new railway is being built in my hometown.The plan turned out to be a failure.Shanghai is situated/ located in the east of China.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.A new railway is under construction in my hometown. 8. She went to Austria in order to study music. 9. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.10. In our school, there are two tennis courts.11. You can find my house easily. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.We have two tennis courts available in our school.Youll have no trouble (in) finding my house. 二、使用较丰富的句式1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail. (使用V-ing形式)2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句)3. Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. (用 过去分词) On his arriving, please give me an e- mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Once seen, it can never be forgotten.4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. ( 使用强调句型)5. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气)It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school. (使用V-ing形式)Singing and laughing, they went back to school.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.8. I wont believe what he says. (使用状语 从句)9. The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (用定语从句)10. It is great fun to climb the hill. (用感叹句)No matter what he says, I wont believe. The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. What great fun it is to climb the hill!11. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. (用并列句)12. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)13. People suggest that the conference be put off. (改被动语态)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Study hard, and youll make rapid progress.It is suggested that the conference be put off.Supplementary: 精选句型1. 不用说/ 不言而喻, It goes without saying that = (It is) needless to say (that) = It is obvious that子句 = Obviously, It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.I.用于文章主题句不用说早睡早起是值得的。2. 俗语说得好:。 Well goes an old saying, = As an old saying goes (runs, says), = An old saying goes like this, 俗话说得好: 诚实为上策。As an old saying goes, Honesty is the best policy.3. 我深信 I am greatly convinced (that) = I am greatly assured (that) = I strongly believe thatI am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure.我深信预防胜于治疗。4. 是很容易证明的。 It can be easily proved that It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than/ is so precious as time.时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。II. 用于文章承转句 1. 我们有理由相信 We have reasons to believe (that) We have every reason to believe thatWe have reasons to believe that physical punishment should be strictly prohibited. 我们有理由相信体罚应该严格禁止。2. 此外,我们不应忽视 Besides (In addition), we should not neglect that In additio
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