读写任务训练广州市第47中学高三备课组一、复习归纳The writer tells us that the parents as well as the pupil and the teacher should do something about education. To start with, parents should provide friendly atmosphere for their children by communicating with them. Next, parents should help their children become more independent. In addition, children should become more responsible with the help of their parents as they grow older. Parents Help Is Important I do agree with what the author says. The parents, the pupil and the teacher should be responsible for childrens education. Parents should provide their children with friendly atmosphere by listening to their children, talking with them and encouraging them to face difficulty. When I was a little child I often asked my parents questions. Instead of paying no attention, my parents always listened carefully to what I was saying and tried to explain everything by giving many examples. To sum up, parents are responsible for their children. Parents help is important. 读写任务型写作模板标题第一段:第二段:第三段:请根据以上范文归纳读写任务型写作模板:概括所给短文内容要点约60字过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点-理由约80字 总结句 约10字 标题 标题是段落中心思想的精练表达形式。根据所 写短文的内容，概括出中心思想然后加以提炼 ，拟定标题； Is time more valuable than money On Smoking How to make friends Happiness Is watching TV a good thing? My view of money / time / pollution My attitude toward building a car factory 第一段：概括所给短文内容要点注意：利用原文中所给的语言材料，用自己的话来写；概括后的文章意思要通顺， 行文要连贯。 写作具体方法和要求: 第一段概括要做到开门见山: 例如: According to the passage, we know This article is mainly about The writer states that 2. 第一段要做到有层次感:必要时概括段中运用firstly,secondly,lastly,或but, so等来列出原文作者观点或内容。 3. 第一段概括要抓住要点,语言精练:The writer tells us that the parents as well as the pupil and the teacher should do something about education. To start with, parents should provide friendly atmosphere for their children by communicating with them. Next, parents should help their children become more independent. In addition, children should become more responsible with the help of their parents as they grow older. Parents Help Is Important 第二段:过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点-理由 开头用语： I do agree with the author In some way, I agree with , but This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical. It is definitely not like that. As a matter of fact, From my personal angle alone In my opinion, From my personal point of view As far as Im concerned 第三段最后一段 : 总结句开头用语： In conclusion, In short, To make a long story short, In general, In a word, In belief, On the whole, All in all, Examples: 1) All in all, the development of children is not only the responsibility of their parents, but also the responsibility of the whole society. 2) In a word, smoking harms yourselves as well as your neighbors, so it should be strictly forbidden. 3) In conclusion, we value money but cant put money above everything else.二、读写训练 读写任务 阅读下面的短文， 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 Let children learn to judge their own work. A child learning to talk doesnt learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected too much, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other peoples. In the same way, children learn to do all the other things. They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicycle by comparing their own behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. Let the student do it himself. Let him work out, with the help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem. 写作内容 1）概括短文的内容要点， 该部分的字数大约60词左右 2）就“学生的学习错误该不该改正”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包括以下的内容 要点，该部分的字数大约60词左右； a)以英语学习为例，简述你学习过程经常出现的语言错误； b)你是如何看待自己的语言错误； c)你的老师如何对待你的语言错误； d)你对老师的做法持什么看法？为什么？ 写作要求 你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不 要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。 评分标准 概括的准确性、语言的规范性、内容的合适性以及篇章的连贯性。 读写任务步骤: （一）审读阅读材料寻找作者的论点,论 据和结论 （二）概括原文观点转述作者的论点，论 据和结论 （三）提出自己观点赞成或反对 （四）论证自己观点用事例论证自己的观 点 （五） 得出结论 审读阅读材料，整理短文说理思路（找出 短文的论点，论据和结论）： 1.论点： Let children learn to judge their own work.任务（一）审读阅读材料 2.论据： 1). A child learning to talk doesnt learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected too much, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other peoples. 正面论据 2). In the same way, children learn to do all the other things. They learn to talk, run, climb, ride