wStep 1 Lead in What is the problem with the passage ?Elvis Presley was born in 1935 and died in 1977. He was a world-famous pop star and will always be loved by his fans from different countries. Elviss parents were very poor and lived in a two- room house. He started singing when he was eight. For his eleventh birthday, Elvis wanted a bicycle but was given a guitar by his parents.wStep 2 How to make sentences better?Task 1 一句多译 他宁愿工作，也不愿在家休息。 He would rather work than have a rest at home. He prefers to work than have a rest at home . He prefers working to having a rest at home. 这个地方值得参观。 The place is worth visiting. The place is worthy of being visited. The place is worthy of a visit. The place is worthy to be visited. 我住在一个房子里，这个房子的窗户面向南。 I live in a house, whose window faces the south. I live in a house, the window of which faces the south. I live in a house; its window faces the south. I live in a house, and its window faces the south. Task 2 加词拓展He is friendly. He is more than just friendly. She lay in bed. She lay in bed , awake, listening to the rushing winds outside. I believe that he will succeed. I believe firmly that he will succeed.Task 3 固定句型 It句型 It will be + some time + before 众所周知，还有两个月我们就要参加高考了（college entrance examination）。_ It is + adj./n.+ for sb. to do sth. 我认为掌握一些有用的学习技巧（study skill）是很重要的。 _ It is + 被强调部分 + that 或许正是这些技巧将会使你在考试中成功。_ （非限制性）定语从句、非谓语动词。 因此，这节由Mr. Zhang 讲的课将会成为你难忘的一次经历。_ with结构 借助这节课学到的技巧，你会发现写一篇令人满意的作文将会变得更容易。_ 名词性从句 然而，坦诚的说，我这节课所传授的只是一些技巧而已。_ 非谓语动词 听了我这些话，你如何看待我这节课？ _w wStep 3 Step 3 F Fillingilling in the blanks and make your sentence structures better OneDear Jane,Glad to hear from you and youre welcome to China in July. The following are some Chinese customs.Firstly, we greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going?” or “Are you busy?” to express our care. Secondly, _(当受到表扬时), we usually reply with “Oh, no!” or “Im over-praised” to show good manners. Next, _(当我们收到礼物时), we usually say “Its unnecessary” besides “Thanks” to show politeness and then put it away. Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses _(当我们为某人的健康或成功干杯时)to show that were warm.Anyhow, different cultures have different customs. If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”, youll enjoy more of your stay here.I hope whats mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.Yours sincerely,Li Hua Two Last weekend, I had an interview with eye-doctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students short-sightedness. _(据说) slightly more than 50% of the students, _(世 界第一), are short-sighted. Professor Wang said the reason for short-sightedness is complicated and there is still no cure for short-sightedness. He suggested that _(我们不要过度用眼) and do more outdoor exercises. Whats more, _(既然握笔也和近 视short-sightedness有关), we need to pay attention to using the pen.wStep 4 WritingWrite a passage using proper sentence patterns within 15 minutes. You can write whatever you like without the limit of words.w Step 5 AssessmentSelf-assessment Group members assessment Teachers assessmentwStep 6 Self-improvement 对课堂上写的文章进行“二次创作”并摘抄到作文本上。