作文讲评 Models in writing27分：徐宫冬子27 26分：胡凌飞 孙源26 25分：刘岫 林霄 曹歆雨 王鑫 宫琪 李嫣然24分：逄宗奇 顾莹莹 付笑楠Models in writing27分：徐宫冬子27 26分：胡凌飞 孙源26 25分：刘岫 林霄 曹歆雨 王鑫 宫琪 李嫣然24分：逄宗奇 顾莹莹 付笑楠27分：王欣然 潘小飞 26分：刘子琰 25分：曲艺，黄稷琛，肖玮， 24分：王雅琍，李璐琪，魏嘉诚，李朝曦， 刘雪，于小超，贺博岩，孙小楠Models in writingModels in writing27分：王欣然 （补） 26分：刘子琰 25分：曲艺，黄稷琛，肖玮， 24分：王雅琍，李璐琪，魏嘉诚，李朝曦， 刘雪，于小超，贺博岩，孙小楠The problems we should kill in writing1.We should do something for our school .Because our school is among the best schools in this province.2. The things mentioned above are that I am proud of. These are the reasons why I am proud of my school. The reason why （句子）is that .(句子), because our school is among the best First （ly）， Second（ly）， 不用the first，the secondMost students= most of the studentsDear teachers and students, Im very glad to be here to make a speech. Our school is like our home, where we stay almost every day. So theres no doubt that Im very proud of our school.Not only has our school been well equipped with so much advanced equipment, but there is also harmonious atmosphere created by everyone. Furthermore, its our teachers devotion to teaching that makes us study better and get good grades. Thanks to our school, we have a brighter future.Our school has done a lot for us but what can we do to repay our school? Its our responsibility to do something to make our school better and better. In my opinion, first of all we should respect the school rules and work harder so that we wont let our teachers and parents down. Secondly, we should protect the environment. We should form a good habit of putting the rubbish into the dustbin. Besides, we are supposed to take an active part in the activities launched by school. Only in this way can we make our school more and more popular.Thank you for listening!Golden sentences1. One of the reason why I am proud of it is that the atmosphere of study in my school is better than any other school in the city. On the other hand, the majority of the students in my school have more polite manners, which shorten the distance between people .As far as I am concerned, everyone in our school should make efforts to make our school better and better,so I will try my best to obey the school rules in my daily life. Only in these ways can we build a first-class senior high! (胡凌飞)2. Reading books is of good benefit us.(王鑫) 3. Its our duty to build up good fame of the school.（李凤） 4. Whats more, it offers us students excellent classrooms to study in. We can learn all kinds of knowledge here. Last but not the least, the teachers here have a great sense of responsibility and very kind to us. Personally speaking, to study better is the best thing we can do .(逄宗奇)5. Whats more,I find the friends that I long for here. Students in our shool are outgoing and friendlly. They play an important part in my life. There is no doubt that we should study harder to achieve our dream. Do every thing we can for our school.Only in this way can we make our school better and more beautiful.（林霄）6. Whats more,when we have trouble doing something,teachers at school always help us to overcome the problems we have,which is very kind of them.(孙源)7. As a consequence,our head master imports a large number of equipment which we can use to do e xperiment. Sparing no effort to study is of most importance.We are all supposed to get good grades to repay our teachers. So I call on everyone to start to do it.(曹歆雨)8. From my point of view, we also need to do something good to our school. Firstly,we shouldnt throw wastepaper in school. And its our duty to keep it clean. Secondly, we ought to behave politely whenever you meet your teachers. Meanwhile, we should get along well with classmates to keep the school life friendly. (李嫣然)Golden sentencesThere are always many teachers around us ready to do me a favour. 王雅琍My school is among the best schools, thus making me proud of it. 王雅琍As a consequence, I want to appeal to everyone to do something for our school.(李璐琪,曲艺)We must show our respect to our teachers. In addition, wed better behave ourselves in public. ( 黄稷琛)I love our school. Studying in it, I feel rich and happy. Living in it, Im comfortable and feel at homein a word, we live in harmony.( 刘子琰)Our school is of great beauty. (王欣然)They all have a sense of responsibility and are enthusiastic about their work. (孙小楠)There is no doubt that It goes without saying that the library is avery important place.(马瑶)To my pride, our school is famous in our city.(陈文龙)I think its the best way to make contributions to my school.(孙锐)Every time you meet difficulty, all students will help you without hesitation. (张凯)We also need to get good grades to repay our school. 赵可I wish everyone could set out to make our school better ! 胡文龙The most important thing I take pride in is that my school is the best in my city. 刘靖琦Lets try some exercises