Error correction & CompositionZhundong Middle School Tony ChenAlthough nobody wishes to experience failure, failure play an important role on the way to success. Sometime, failure can benefit us a lot. When I failed my English exam three years before, I felt upset at first, but then I made up my mind to work even hard. That failure motivated me put more time and energy into learning English. After find out my problem was a lack of vocabulary and I was poorly in grammar, I changed my learning methods. I learnt a lot from past mistake. Finally I made a great progress in English. Failure really helped you to get closer to success. 名 词词 动动 词词 形 容 词词 副 词词 代 词词 介 词词 冠 词词 连连 词词 非 谓谓 语语 动动 词词正 确2005 1401101112006 112210201短文改错考查点2010/2009高考英语语短文改错错分析 冠词词 1加词词 非谓语谓语2改词词 时态语态时态语态2改词词/去词词 名词词数1改词词 介词词/搭配 1改词词 副词词/形容词词1改词词 代词词1改词词 连词连词1改词词1 1 1 11 1 2 2Although nobody wishes to experience failure, failure play an important role on the way to success. Sometime, failure can benefit us a lot. When I failed my English exam three years before, I felt upset at first, but then I made up my mind to work even hard. That failure motivated me put more time and energy into learning English. After find out my problem was a lack of vocabulary and I was poorly in grammar, I changed my learning methods. I learnt a lot from past mistake. Finally I made a great progress in English. Failure really helped you to get closer to success.Although nobody wishes to experience failure, failure plays an important role on the way to success. Sometimes, failure can benefit us a lot. When I failed my English exam three years ago, I felt upset at first, but then I made up my mind to work even harder. That failure motivated me to put more time and energy into learning English. After finding out my problem was a lack of vocabulary and I was poor in grammar, I changed my learning methods. I learnt a lot from past mistakes. Finally I made a great progress in English. Failure really helped me to get closer to success.play sometime before hard motivated me put find poorly mistake made a great progress youplays sometimes ago harder motivated me to put finding poor mistakes made great progress me时态语态主谓一致连接词介词副词形容词介词非谓语动词副词形容词名词单复数冠词代词自治区二模试试卷 冠词词 1改词词 非谓语谓语1加词 时态语态时态语态1减词 名词词数1 介词词/搭配 2 副词词/形容词词2 代词词1 连词连词18 1 1Although most people have a family, in their darkest moments many will turn to nobody they consider “a true friend” for support and advice. But what make someone “a true friend”, rather than just a good friend? A true friend will always try harder help. They will be sensitive to their feelings and will not criticize you. They will offer help without being asking and will never expect anything in return. A true friend will put aside whichever they are doing to come and see you if you are in seriously trouble. They will offer their support in your need, as if everyone else in the world is against you. If you dont have many friends, but you have one true friend, and you are very lucky. But remember, if you have a true friend, you have to be his true friend too. True friend give as well as take.Although most people have a family, in their darkest moments many will turn to somebody they consider “a true friend” for support and advice. But what makes someone “a true friend”, rather than just a good friend? A true friend will always try harder to help. They will be sensitive to your feelings and will not criticize you. They will offer help without being asked and will never expect anything in return. A true friend will put aside whatever they are doing to come and see you if you are in serious trouble. They will offer their support in your need, even if everyone else in the world is against you. If you dont have many friends, but you have one true friend, and you are very lucky. But remember, if you have a true friend, you have to be his true friend too. True friends give as well as take.乌鲁乌鲁 木齐齐市三模试试卷 冠词词 0改词词 非谓语谓语2加词 时态语态时态语态1减词 名词词数1 介词词/搭配 0 副词词/形容词词1 代词词2 连词连词38 1 1Dear Sir,I am Li Hua. I am born in 1992 and I am going to graduate in senior high school. I am willing to be a volunteer in your charity after graduate.I am out-going and warm-hearted boy. I have many hobby. I can also do good in communicating with other.The reason why that I want to be a volunteer is that I can practice myself from the work and I love help others. This job can give him a chance to make my dreams come true. I need such experience. best wishes,Li HuaDear Sir,I am Li Hua. I was born in 1992 and I am going to graduate from senior high school. I am willing to be a volunteer in your charity after graduating.I am an out-going and warm-hearted boy. I have many hobbies. I can also do well in communicating with others.The reason why I want to be a volunteer is that I can practice myself from the work and I love helping others. This job can give me a chance to make my dream come true.