高三复习写作讲评课高三复习写作讲评课 Assessment take it as; open it for Places of interest/tourist attractions Attract tourists/appeal to visitors/ be attraction for visitorsGive to/Rentto/be rented to Sport company/companies which organize matches/organizing matches Make/ create money; bring in money/make more profitsOpen/be opened to the people/public/open them to public. Be used for/as; be made to; Do some exercise/build our bodies/strengthen our bodies信息2 信息3 信息4向公众开放，用于健身 租给体育公司，创造经济效益 开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客正 文.信息5 总结，意愿结尾In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned./from my point of view. I would appreciate I would you will think of /takeinto consideration.开头 信息108年奥运会刚刚落幕. 征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议. 你想写一些建议.The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games were over/finished. The 29th Olympic Games were held successfully in Beijing. Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games with a great success.The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. Beijing achieved its dream of hosting the 29th Olympic Games successfully. Collect some advice How to use/make use of /make the best of the stadiums. After the Olympic Games After Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games .You are collecting some advice on how to make use of the stadiums after Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games . I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums after Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games successfully.Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice Contribute some suggestions to you.I would like to give you some advice.I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you4.Use it as/be used for/as;take it as;open it for Places of interests/tourist attractions Attract tourists/appeal to visitors/ be attraction for visitors3.Give to/Rentto/be rented toSport company/companies which organize matches/organizing matches Make/creat mony; bring in money/make more profits信息2 信息3 信息4向公众开放，用于健身 租给体育公司，创造经济效益 开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客正 文2.Open/be opened to the people/public/open them to public. Be used for/as; be made to; Do some exercise/build our body/strengthen our bodies2.The stadiums can be opened to the public. The public can build their bodies/strengthen their bodies 3.The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in more money/make more profits4.They can be used as tourist attraction.It can attract many visitors.信息5 总结，意愿结尾In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned./from my point of view. I would appreciate I would you will think of /takeinto consideration. In a wordFrom my point of view, we should do what we can to make full use of the stadium. I would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep considerationPara.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.Para.2:The stadiums can be opened to the public. The public can build their bodies/strengthen their bodies. The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in more money/make more profits. They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors.Para.3: From my point of view, we should do what we can to make full use the stadium. I would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep considerationPara.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.Para.1: I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums after the 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. Here I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.Para.2:The stadiums can be opened to the public. The public can strengthen their bodies. The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in much more profits. They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors.Para.2: First of all, the stadiums can be opened to the public.The public can strengthen their bodies. Secondly,The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in much more profits. last but not least, They can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors.First of all Firstly, To begin with,In addition, Besides, Moreover, Whats moreFinally, Whats worse,使用恰当的连接词逻辑逻辑 角度合适的过过渡性词汇词汇 排序关系 并列关系举举例关系转转折关系因果关系归纳总结归纳总结递进递进 关系first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least and; too; as well as; along with; together withfor example; for instance; like; such as; as tobut; however; while; though; on the contrarybecause; since; thanks to; as a result /consequence (of); thus; thereforein a word; in short; to sum up; in conclusionwhats more; besides; to make matters worse; whats worse; worse still; furthermoreI heard you are collecting some