返回作文点评题目要求假设你是李明,你的英籍笔友彼得十年前到过北京。他计划今年再来北京。在他的印象中北京的公共交通设施有些萱后.出行不便。因此,他来信询问现在的状况是否有改善。请根据表格中已有四通八达的道路交内容及项目1999年2007年2008年variousbuses8200辆|24000辆|32000辆busroutes(线路)520条750条820条lengthofhighways【8000km|19000Km|20000kmlengthof14e亨g河绍气gn芒n(54km114km300kmrailwaysandcity-rails注意:1.词数:100左右;2.不得返条翻译;3.开头与结尾已为你写好.不计人总词数。DearPeter。Gladtohavereadyourletter.TomeetyourrequestT一tellyousomethingaboutthepresentpublictransportofBetjing.AsyouS霆id_柏heletldqblicrtxansporofBeijingin1999wasntreally菖OOdenou&h1、,tisbelievedthatithasbeenmuchbetterafterthe29thOlympicGamestookplaceinBeijingin2008.Yoursever,LiMing写作批DearPeter。Gladtohavereadyourletter,Tomeetyourrequest,T一tellyousomethingaboutthepresentpublietransportofBei-Asyousqid达,jing.thqletertpublictransportofBeijingin1999havebeengreatlychangedinwasntreallygoodCD寓hButthinthepasttenyears.Nowthereare24.000buses.runningon750busroutes,whichare3timesasmanyasthosein1999.Youcangettonearlyeverycornerofthecityeasilybybusuwhichcostsnotmuch.Bytheyear2008,32,000buseshavecovered820routesthrough-outthecity、Asforhighways,nowthetotallengthofhighwaysinBeijingisover19.000km,Believeitornot,in1999thenumberwasonly8.000km,Inaddition,undergroundrailwaysandcity-railsare-vailablefastandsafely,Thepresentlength,M4kmuhasrisentc300kmbytheyearof2008.Thenumberwasonly54kmin1999。ThuspublictransportinBeijinghastakenonanewlook-tisveryconveniemtfolreomhutersandtooristesyItisbelievedh英ithsbeenfntcFbEtterwhenthe29thOlympicGamestakeplaceinBeijingin2008.YourseverLiMing教师点评1.精彩的单词及短语:available.inthepasttenyears,asforbelieveitornot,takeon。2.准确的语法及句型=非谓i叻问什mg)Wh引导的非限制性定语从句,将来完成时Cwillhavecovered.羞介适的连接*清抖落Bh】dddnIhus等”4.Butthingshavebeen去掉been.情况发生了极大的变化.应用主动语态。5.fastandfer巾的safely改为唰祀谷门竹主补。妲其界担.1.Asyousaidintheletter,publictransportofBeijingin1999wasntreallygoodenough.2.Nowthereare24,000buses,runningon750busroutes,whichare3timesasmanyasthosein1999.3.ThuspublictransportinBeijinghastakenonanewlook.