2009-2010(2)实用英语写作Speakers Personal Data: Name: Cao Luman / 曹路漫 Home Address: Nanyang City Office Address: Room 101 Office Telephone: 63513722 E-mail: luman0253126.com Date1Todays Topics1. 课程介绍 四六级考试评分标准及应对措施 研究生考试评分标准及应对措施 英语写作基本要求Date21. 课程介绍一、课程名称：实用英语写作 Practical English Writing课程负责人：曹路漫 二、学时与学分：32学时 2学分 三、课程类别：全校提高课程学生 四、开课单位：外国语学院 五、课程的主要内容：写作格式、思想组织、篇章结构、文章体裁、整篇作文。重点教授英语写作的基础内容，使学生掌握好措词，学会正确使用标点。另外，学生还要掌握句子、段落、提纲方面的最基本的写作理论与技巧，写出主题较为明确、内容较为完善、语言较为通顺 、格式符合要求的文章。 六、课程的基本教学要求：把握中英文语言文化表现中的同，掌握、了解新知识、新信息，有利于学生增强创新与创作意识、培养实践能力，做到学以致用。 Date32.四六级考试评分标准 作文分值占整卷的15% ，以15分为例 2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分 句 子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较 多的严重语言错误。 8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字 勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语 言错误。 14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。 基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。(注: 白卷, 作文 与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想 ,则给0分。) Date4四、六级评分差异 在逻辑分析问题形成的原因时，也就是文章的 中间主题段落，四级考生只要用基本的句型表 达清楚就可以了。而六级的要求则普遍偏高。 考生必须从表层浅显，甚至时司空见惯的社会 生活现象挖掘出深层的本质原因。 从思维高度上，如果说六级要求高。那么在表 达的方式上，六级使用的句子长度和难度都比 较高。比如在范文四中最长的句子可以高达46 个单词。而在四级中则没有这种复杂多变的句 子。还有一个问题需要提醒考生，六级作文明 显体现出从句多，层次关系复杂。 Date5Example Part Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Harmfulness of Fake Commodities. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fake commodities) 。为什么会有这种现象? 2. 举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害 。 Date6Model 1 （146 W） Each individual encounters such troubles as sickness and discomfort situations in his or her development. Similarly, each society is inevitably harmfully impacted by immoral or even illegal economic activities in the process of its evolvement. The most notorious and harmful among these despicable actives are fake commodities. Fake commodities, like a virus that intrudes and cripples an organism, exert alarmingly detrimental influences on each individual consumer, the community, and the social mores as well. They directly hurt the consumers by providing products that are priced highly but inferior in quality. Sometimes such products as faked medicine or foods can threaten consumers life, needless to mention consumers economic loss. The more fake commodities a society has, the more exacerbated the moral and ethic in that society. What the society must immediately address is to minimize the quantity of any fake commodities and eradicate any opportunity to manufacture them. Date7Model 2 （204） Economic boom should bring people a more comfortable and convenient life. Ironically, the more commodities available in a society whose economic fabric is not woven by legal and moral warp and woof , the less and less security the average consumers can have. In fact, even today the public is still jeopardized by fake commodities that flood almost each developing country. Fake commodities directly harm the average individual consumers in a series of ways. First they are usually inferior in quality and thus cannot meet consumers ends. Take a fake watch as an example, it is sold at the same price as is the genuine one but seldom can it give time precisely. Secondly, they might threaten consumers health and life in case of fake foods, medicine, and beverages. Some patients are seriously endangered by taking fake medicines. Some even lose their life immediately after eating fake soybean sauces and vinegar. The society as a whole is also detrimentally infected by fake commodities as far as the moral and ethic is concerned. Then, how to address this serious problem? Most vital is to legally penalize those who manufacture and trade fake products. Second is to educate people how to tell the facts and fiction. Date8Model 3 （） The society has hundreds and thousands of fake commodities. They are almost everywhere. They are in daily life, hospital, supermarkets, and so on. Why do we have these fake commodities? This question has not only attracted the interests from the scientists but also from the general public. Generally three reasons have been given to explain this phenomenon. First of all, fake commodities are usually profitable. They are lower in cost and of course, in quality, but are high in price. Secondly, the society often finds it hard to help consumers to tell fake ones from the genuine goods. Third, legal restrictions against fake commodities are not work at all or work with lower efficiency. Fake commodities do harm to the human life. They can damage the life or ruin ones happiness, depending on what kind of fake commodities consumers have bought. They can also damage the society as a whole if the fake commodities are not restricted by governments or other agencies. Fake medicines are a typical example. Today, even in the field of academic, fake papers are not uncommon. All these fake commodities exert negative impacts on human civilization. Date9Model 4 （） Fake commodities