作文指导DISCUSSION: What is a good guided writing？Content: everything needed included(内容要全)Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed(结构合理,行文流畅)Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)观察下图，根据图中内容写一篇短文，说明你和爸爸对暑假的不同看法 。 1、 短文必须包括图画内容，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯 2、 词数100左右。生词：拐骗 (kidnap vt.)Topic- summer holiday The child: go fishing, play football, climb high mountains, ride my bicycle, play chess with my father Father: be hurt by a truck, fall into the water, fall off a tree, fight against others, be kidnapped bybad men cage 请根据下面的短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。标题为：My Teacher Mr. MooreTheres a teacher Mr. Moore. Who is lovely and thirty-four. Always encouraging us to try. He leads us to a world of “why”.We all admire him more and more.标题为：My Teacher Mr. Moore Theres a teacher Mr. Moore. Who is lovely and thirty-four. Always encouraging us to try. He leads us to a world of “why”. We all admire him more and more.The summer holiday which Im looking forward to is coming. . I must try my best to persuade my father. Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one who impresses me most. He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.Fill in the blanks with the suitable linking words since, on the contrary, in short, before thatIm very pleased to tell you about the changes of my life since the reduction of learning load was brought in. _ I was often exhausted at weekends. I attended school and had classes the whole day. In the evening, I was often forced to do my boring homework and I could not go to bed until 11：30. _ the program of reducing learning load was introduced, my life has become much more interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums, drop in at computer rooms and draw pictures in my leisure time. After lunch, I watch TV, read stories and look through newspapers to enrich myself. No longer do I stay up; _, I go to bed at about 10p.m. _I am quite satisfied with my life now.Im very pleased to tell you the changes of my life since the reduction of learning load was brought in. Before that, I was often exhausted at weekends. I attended school and had classes the whole day. In the evening，I was often forced to do my boring homework and I could not go to bed until 11:30. Since the program of reducing learning load was introduced, my life, however, has become much more interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums, drop in at computer rooms and draw pictures in my leisure time. After lunch, I watch TV, read stories and look through newspapers to enrich myself. No longer do I stay up; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 p.m. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now. Linking words in your writing:递进: then, besides, furthermore, moreover, in addition, whats more, apart from转折: however, but, although, though, yet, on the contrary, despite, in spite of, whereas, while, otherwise.总结: finally, at last, in brief, in short, in summary, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, to summarize, all in all.强调: indeed, certainly, surely, above all.对比: in the same way, similarly, just as, unlike, different from.因果: because (of), as a result of, owing to, thanks to, result from, lie inconsequently, therefore, hence, thus, for this reason, as a result, result in, lead toAvoid Chinglish! 1) Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded. 2) During the trip, you may happen a traffic accident. 3) Please come to visit me this summer vacation if you are convenient. 4) I forgot my dictionary at home. 5) This year will produce more steel than last year.Corrected 1) Traffic in Shanghai is too heavy. 2) During the trip, a traffic accident may happen. 3) Please come to visit me this summer vacation if it is convenient for/to you. 4) I left my dictionary at home. 5) This year the factory will produce more steel than last year.Please find 5 mistakes in this writing. We had guests last night who had not lived in a B&B hotel before. They did not want breakfast because they were going out early in the morning. They came back lately and had some tea. I came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light. He was finding a glass in the cupboard. He had no idea that the kitchen was not for guests. I just smiled to me and thought, “What can I do?” They are guests after all. We had guests last night who had not stayed in a B&B hotel before. They did not want breakfast because they were going out early in the morning. They came back late and had some tea. I came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door and turn on the light. He was looking for a glass in the cupboard. He had no idea that the kitchen was not for guests. I just smiled to myself and thought, “What can I do？ ” They are guests after all. Poli