英语写作常见表达错误纠正1 Some people thing that failure is a bad thing . Firstly , failure has influence in confidence, so it can make people lost their direction. While if someone lost his direction , he wont make his dream come true forever . That is very serious . 修改版：Some people argue that failure is a bad thing, with the reason being that if people fail to do something, he will lose confidence in such a thing. Besides, constant failures will be bound to affect peoples confidence in doing everything. Without confidence, how can people do things successfully? 英语写作常见表达错误纠正2 It is said that “failure is the mother of succeed “ . They are inclined to the idea that if people sum up from the failure , they will learn something and it is useful to get their goal .修改版：As the saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success”, which means /meaning people can always learn something from failure and it is very useful to his future success in achieving goals. 英语写作常见表达错误纠正3 It is important for everyone to stay healthy . To other words, everyone wants to stay healthy . How can we stay healthy ? Which is the best way to stay healthy ? It is said that “get ill by the mouth “ , so we must eat healthy first when we want to stay healthy . That means we eat meal on time and make sure the food is ok . 修改版: There is no doubt that everyone wants to stay healthy. Nowadays, it is commonly agreed that health is above wealth. But how can we maintain a healthy body? When asked this question, different people may come up with different ways of keeping fit. Some people say that we should eat healhty diet if we want to avoid getting ill. According to them, people get sick mainly because they eat unhealthy food. 英语写作常见表达错误纠正4 We also should take some exercise . if you take some exercise every day , you will become strong and healthy , so that illness keep away from you . Every coin has two sides , different people have different ideas . In my opinion , the best way to stay healthy is that you must eat healthy 修改版: Other people, however, hold that doing exercises is the best way to enjoy a healthy body. In their opinions, people will keep away from illness as long as they do regular exercise, such as running and swimming. As far as I am concerned, the most effective way of keeping healthy is to 英语写作常见表达错误纠正5 When asked about failure,some people become frustrated and they will lose them confidence.It is a bad thing for them.And failure will take great bad effect on their lives. 修改版: When talking about failure, people often feel frustrated and some people are even fearful at the mention of failure. Admittedly, constant failure will result in peoples lack of courage and confidence and thus have negative effect on their daily life and work. But is failure a bad thing? Peoples ideas vary. 英语写作常见表达错误纠正6 As far as I am concerned,I tend to the latter.That is,I dont think failure is a bad thing.Instead,I believe for a successful people, failure is a stopping stone. 修改版: As far as I am concerned, I prefer the latter. In other words, I believe that failure is not absolutely negtaive.As we know, failure is something that we can never avoid in the course of achieving success. For those who succeed eventually, failure is the source of experience; for those who always complain about failure, failure is the source of misfortune. 英语写作常见表达错误纠正7. Cities should be kept clean in spite of the size of it. It is not such an easy thing to keep our city clean. The phenomenon in todays society is not optimistic. The unethical behavior of some people has affected the citys image. (缺少连贯性）修改版: Cities should be kept clean regardless of the size. But it is by no means easy to ensure the cleanness of a city due to peoples unethical behaviors. Thus, some people hold that the prospect of a citys clean image is not optimistic. 英语写作常见表达错误纠正8. As far as I am concerned, the governments relevant policies and the action of the volunteers are the part of the action. We should try our best to do something by our selves no matter you are a man or a woman, young or old.修改版: As far as I am concerned, to keep a city clean, the governments policy and citizens awareness are of vital importance. With the governments strict law, people dare not do things that are harful to the environment. With peoples raised consciousness and voluntary actions, the citys tomorrow will be cleaner. 英语写作常见表达错误纠正9. Some people hold the idea that do a pat-time job is good for college students. As far as they are concerned, college students have enough personal time to control. They take advantage of this period time to do a part-time job, which will enrich their social experience and broaden their eye shot. But I couldnt agree with th