首先让我们来看近年来全国高考英 语书面表达的评分标准：第五档（很好 ）：“覆盖所有主要内容；应用了较多的 语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面 有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构 或较高级词汇所致；应用简单的语句间 的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；达到了 预期的写作目的。”一一. . 学会使用高级词汇学会使用高级词汇二二. . 学会使用丰富的句式学会使用丰富的句式三三. . 学会使用恰当的连接词学会使用恰当的连接词Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.our journey was comfortable. We all think he is a great man.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. Thanks to the good weatherThanks to the good weather, think highly of him think highly of him A good idea A good idea occurred tooccurred to me. me. A good idea suddenly A good idea suddenly struckstruck me. me.一一. . 学会使用高级词汇学会使用高级词汇The students there neednt pay for their books.As a result the plan was a failure.When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.she went pale with sorrow. She went to Austria in order to study music. She went to AustriaBooks are free for the students there. Books are free for the students there. The plan turned out (to be) a failure.The plan turned out (to be) a failure.At the news of his death, At the news of his death, for/with the purpose of for/with the purpose of studying music. studying music. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.In our school, there are twentysix classrooms.You can find my house easily.The more he spoke, the more excited he feelThe more he spoke, the more excited he feel Our school is made up of twentysix classroomsOur school is made up of twentysix classrooms Twentysix classrooms make up our school.Twentysix classrooms make up our school.Youll have no trouble/difficulty finding my house.Youll have no trouble/difficulty finding my house.二二. . 学会使用丰富的句式学会使用丰富的句式在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句型，要灵 活运用各种语法结构，运用得当的句子结构可以 给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V- ing形式） To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（ 使用名词性从句） On his arriving/ arrival, please give me an e-mail.On his arriving/ arrival, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is thatWhat surprises him is that That the littler girl knows so many things surprises him. That the littler girl knows so many things surprises him. It surprises him that the littler girl knows so many things It surprises him that the littler girl knows so many things . .Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句使用倒装句) )He did not know what had happened until he had read He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型使用强调句型.It was .It was .not until) .not until) Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.newspaper that he knew what had happened.Not until he had read the news in the newspaper Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened. did he know what had happened. I passed the physics exam because of your help.（使用 虚拟语气） She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (用过去分词) They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) I could not have passed the physics exam but for I could not have passed the physics exam but for your help.your help.If you had not helped me, I could not have passed the If you had not helped me, I could not have passed the physics exam. physics exam. Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. Singing and laughing, they went back to school.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.I wont believe what he says. （使用状语从句） If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （使 用并列句） He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句) No matter what he says, I wont believe. No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress. Study hard and youll make rapid progress. No sooner had he come back from No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. Beijing than he was sent abroad. 三三. . 学会使用恰当的连接词学会使用恰当的连接词使用恰当连接词，对写出一篇有使用恰当连接词，对写出一篇有“ “英语味英语味” ”的文章很的文章很 重要，能使整篇文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章有重要，能使整篇文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章有 一定的流畅性，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。下面一定的流畅性，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。下面 表格中是写作中经常用到的一些连接词。表格中是写作中经常用到的一些连接词。逻辑角度时间顺序空间顺序合适的过渡性词汇first, second, then, finally/at last, first, second, then, finally/at last, immediately, suddenly , soonimmediately, suddenly , soon here, there, on one sideon the other here, there, on one sideon the other side, in front of, at the back of, next toside, in front of, at the back of, next to逻辑角度对称顺序转折顺序因果顺序条件顺序让步顺序合适的过渡性词汇for one thing, _, for one thing, _, on one hand, _ on one hand, _ for another thingfor another thing on the other handon the other handbut, however, while, though, otherwise but, however, while, though, otherwise because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of)because, since, as