二轮英语考生要写好书面表达,首先应该了解高考书面表达评分原则和评分标准。一、评分原则1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。4.评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差,以致影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。名师课堂专题三 写作技法指导二轮英语二、评分标准第五档(21-25分):完全完成了试题规定的任务覆盖所有内容要点,使用了较复杂结构和较高级词汇,应用了较多的语法结构和语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。好的书面表达应该字迹清楚工整(整体美观的答卷应该单词大小适当,全文布局合理,留足天、地、边,字迹清楚工整),内容全面,使用高级词汇和高级句式,语法和词汇用法基本没有错误,拼写和标点正确,上下文衔接自然。二轮英语技巧一高级词汇和高级句式一、使用高级词汇“三原则”1.精准选词,标新立异写作时选词要精准,适当使用不容易想到的词汇,适度求新求异。(1)In the coming three years,our school life will be difficult.In the coming three years,our school life will be challenging.(2014江西高考书面表达)(2)I received your email last week,but Im busy preparing for my final exam,which is important for me,so I didnt reply to you without delay.I received your email last week,but Im busy preparing for my final exam,which is vital for me,so I didnt reply to you without delay.(2013山东高考满分作文)二轮英语2.变换用词,避免重复尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词,必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组 来代替。I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. 3.短语优先,增加文采多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。 (1)To achieve ones dream,one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.To achieve ones dream,one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. (2013北京 高考满分作文) (2)Whats more,we can pour out the troubles we face,and release our pressure from different aspects.Whats more,we can pour out the troubles we are faced with,and release our pressure from different aspects.(2013重庆高考满分作文)二轮英语【即学即练】运用高级词汇“三原则”改写加黑的词或短语。1.We all have the same chance.2.We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend.3.Developing a good habit is also important.参考答案:1.possess 2.endless 3.of importance 二轮英语4.He didnt listen to what I said in the class.5.Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.6.The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.参考答案:4.turned a deaf ear to 5.promote 6.challenging二轮英语二、使用高级句式“六策略” 1.使用被动语态(1)So people need enough water to feed such a large population.So enough water is needed to feed such a large population.(2)Im delighted to know that the Shanghai Museum will organize a famous art exhibition and you are collecting opinions of the public as to selecting the location for the exhibition,which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.Im delighted to know that a famous art exhibition will be organized by the Shanghai Museum and opinions of the public are being collected as to selecting the location for the exhibition,which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.(2013上海高考满分作文)二轮英语2.使用倒装句(1)Better still,it writes so smoothly that it can contribute to making our handwriting better.Better still,so smoothly does it write that it can contribute to making our handwriting better. (2014湖南高考书面表达)(2)The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way.Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy.(2013福建高考满分作文) 3.使用省略句(1)English words are easily forgotten unless they are constantly repeated.English words are easily forgotten unless constantly repeated.(2)If it is so,I hope you will have a wonderful time.If so,I hope you will have a wonderful time. (2013山东高考满分作文) 二轮英语4.使用强调句(1)We created a harmonious atmosphere with sincerity and faithfulness.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.(2014江西高考书面表达)(2)As a saying goes,the little thing matters most.As a saying goes,it is the little thing that matters most.(2013上海高考满分作文)5.使用非谓语动词(1)Since I know that our library is going to buy books,Id like to give some suggestions.Knowing that our library is going to buy books,Id like to give some suggestions.(2014浙江高考书面表达)二轮英语(2)If I were given the choice,I would make donations to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living conditions.Given the choice,I would make donations to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living conditions.(2014广东高考书面表达)6.使用with的复合结构(1)His mother is paving the ways for him while his father is holding his jacket behind him,and we can see sweat on his face.His mother is paving the ways for him while his father is holding his jacket behind him,with sweat on his face.(2013福建高考满分作文) (2)As the society develops rapidly,its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.With the society developing rapidly,its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.二轮英语【即学即练】 运用高级句式“六策略”改写下列句子。 1.Above all,we must do something to stop pollution.(使用被动语态 )2.I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(使用强调句)3.I didnt realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways until then.(使用倒装句)参考答案: 1.Above all,so