记叙文类读写任务 An old man went to live with his son, daughter-in-law, and four-year-old grandson. The family ate together at the table, but his shaky hands and failing sight made eating difficult. Peas rolled off his spoon onto the floor. When he grasped the glass, milk spilled on the tablecloth. The son and daughter-in-law became angry with the mess. So they set a small table in the corner. There Grandfather ate alone while they enjoyed dinner. Since Grandfather had broken a dish or two, his food was served in a wooden bowl. Still, the only words the couple had for him were sharp when he dropped a fork or spilled food. The grandson watched silently. One evening, the father noticed the son playing with wood scraps and asked the child sweetly, “What are you making?” The boy responded, “Oh, I am making a bowl for you and mum to eat your food in when I grow up.” The words struck the parents so hard that they were speechless. Then tears started to stream down their cheeks. The son took gently led Grandfather back to their table. From then on, he ate every meal with them. Neither of them seemed to care any longer when a fork was dropped, milk spilled, or the tablecloth soiled. 写作内容 1. 以约30个词概括故事的主要情节； 2. 以约120个词就“关爱老人”这个主题发表你的看 法，并包括如下要点： (1)以你自己的一次亲身经历讲述你跟老人相处的事 例。 (2)你认为我们应该怎么对待老人。 写作要求 1. 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构故事，也 可以参照阅读材料的内容, 但不得直接引用原文中 的句子。 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适， 篇章连贯。 作文典型问题 1 题目不规范 2 字数不符， 格式不对，书写不规范 3 没有按题目要求写作： 1）没有举例说 明 2）所举例子不是亲身经历 3）举例太 详细， 而且没有突出主题 4 拼写错误（finally)， 语法错误（时态 ， 人称代词，句子缺谓语等）Love The Old Summary 部分27-35Ws ， Body 部分 120Ws 记叙文 Summary 1. 只写故事大意（应该用最简练的语言来 说明故事大意，不能拖泥带水讲细节。） 2. 故事大意+启示或道理（材料中有较明显 的告知启示的句子） 人称：一般第三人称 时态：与原文一致 要素：Who , when , where, what, why, how 启示：可有可没有 The story tells us that an old man was treated badly by his son and his daughter- in law. The grandson noticed and imitated his parents. His parents worried about it. Therefore, they change attitude to the old man.(37 Ws) An old man was treated badly by his son and his daughter-in law. After the grandson made a bowl for his parents. They changed their attitude to the old man and treated him well.(陈志雄） The story tells us that a couple treated their father badly. At last, the couples attitudes was changed by their sons words and behavior that the son was preparing a bowl for them.（33 Ws) (彭春 艳） The story mainly tells us that a man and his wife treat (treated) badly their father. Then his son with the same way treat them (treated them in the same way). Finally , they change (changed) the attitude to his (their) father.(叶芸花）Summary The story tells us that the grandfather was treated badly by his son and daughter-in- law and the change of the couples attitudes after they saw their son was preparing a bowl for them. / sons words and behavior. (33 words) The story tells us that the patients treat their father badly, so their son wants to do what they have done. At last, the parents feel ashamed and treat their father well. (曹昕妤）学生问题概括 The story tells us that an old man live together with his son. At the beginning, the old man ate together on the table with family. But late, the couple are angry with the behaviors of the old man and let the old man ate alone in a corner. Luckily, because of the grandsons words, the couple changed their opinion. 划线部分虽表达故事大意，但写得太细）Body 部分 2. 以约120个词就“关爱老人”这个主题发表你 的看法，并包括如下要点： (1)以你自己的一次亲身经历讲述你跟老人相 处的事例。时态：过去的具体例子用一般过去时 平时通常做的行为可用一般现在时。注意：主语是I, My (2)你认为我们应该怎么对待老人。时态： 一般现在时应写出具体做法。(1)以你自己的一次亲身经历讲述你 跟老人相处的事例 经历：时间，人物，事情，结果或感受或启示 切忌写太细节的东西，不需要背景铺垫。 具体例子只写一个就足够 注意控制字数 可以适当编造些吸引人的故事或例子以支持你的论 点。 不要单纯写例子，应该通过某个经历，自己感悟出 些道理，并注意与下文连接。如感悟出老人希望有 人理解，有人陪，需要得到关注和帮助，或我们应 该尊重老人。在段首或例子后用一句话概括即可。学生问题作文 So long as man has a happy family, he can enjoy the pleasures of human life. I know an old man who lives in a poor village. He was very sad, because he lived alone, and his son and his daughter in-law never came to visit him. One day, he got sick, and I came across him. I asked some question to him and he told me his situation. After hearing that, I was sympathy with him. I took him to the hospital. At last, he got happy and I always chatted with him.改写 (So long as man has a happy family, he can enjoy the pleasures of human life. )Once, I came across an old man who got serious ill. After chatting, I knew that he was an lonely man because his family members never came to see him. I was sympathy with him and took him to the hospital. From then on I always chatted with him since I realize that the old need our concern.参考文章 As for me, I always showed my respect and love to the old. When I was young, I brought my questions to them for help often, which made them busy but happy. I formed a habit to take a walk with them after dinner, talking about my study, ambitions and their rich experience.举例子/ 写经历 1）There are several ways of approaching/ solvi