TEM 4 Composition高校英语专业四级考试大纲将写作分成两个部分：Section A: Composition测试目的：检查学生在基础阶段末期的英语写作能 力。测试要求：根据所给的题目及具体要求，写一篇 200字左右的短文。测试时间：35分钟测试短文类别：说明文、议论文或记叙文。评阅标准：内容切题完整，条理清楚，意思明确， 文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。Composition Marking Criteria15 points:文章内容切题，思想表达清楚，行文通顺流畅，论证严密，论据充分，基本上无 语言错误。14-12 points:文章内容切题，思想表达清楚，语言比较通顺、连贯、只有极少量语法错误。11-9 points:文章内容基本切题，尚能表达中心思想，但说理不够清楚，文字连贯不够好，有 少量语法错误。8-6 points:基本切题，思想表达不够清楚，连贯性差，语言错误多。5-3 points:文章条理不清，语言缺乏连贯，句子错误很多，或语言虽通顺流畅，但完全偏题 。注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0 分。 1.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数 2.只写一段者：04分；只写两段者：09分（指规定三段的作文）长度计分标准: 170150词: 扣1分 130150词: 扣2分 110130词: 扣3分 90110词: 扣4分 90词以下: 至多给5分 经原国家教委批准，四、六级考试已从1997年6月 份起采用“作文最低”制计算成绩，其中足见国家 对提高大学英语写作能力的重视程度。按规定，考 生作文若为0分，无论其总分是否高于60分，均作 不及格处理；若其作文分高于0分，低于6分，报导 成绩时，需从总分中减去6分，再加上实得作文分 。也就是说，要从总分中减去实得作文分与6分之 间的差额部分。英语专业四级考试委员会要求阅卷人员评分时综合 考虑以下四个问题:1. 作文是否体现主题思想;即是要求作文文章切题,全文统一,无不相关细节内 容.2. 组织结构是否合理;主要体现在全文条理清楚,组织连贯和谐,善于使用 衔接语以增强文章的逻辑性.3. 语言文字是否有重大错误;4. 卷面布局是否整洁.2006年TEM-4作文试题及样卷评分TopicRecently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, Guangzhou, Xian, Chengdu, Shanghai, Wuhan, Nanjing and Shengyang. The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrows money today is better. What do you think? InstructionsWrite a composition of about 200 words.You are to write in three parts.In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate details.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.Sample 1The Good Habit Nowadays, more and more young people think that it is better that using tomorrows money today than saving money, while in my opinion, I think its right. For the first, our contrair has to develop. So it calls us to use more money to let the nation develop. And then, that may make our life more comfortable. For example, I heard a story. There are two man. A use tomorrows money to buy a new houseas he has to pay money to the bank every monthswhile B start keeping money.Twenty years later, B finally keeping enough money to buy a new house, but A has been lived in it for twenty years and pay enough money to the bank. At the end, if we have the abilile to pay the list, why we dont use tomorrows money to let our life more wonderful? So, thats what I think.5-6分。结构基本符合，但语言过于简单，语法错误多，内 容模糊不清，题目不正确，字数少于170。举例不可信。举例应该真实可信，比如亲身经历、朋友体验或者名人轶事等。文章结尾太简单。Sample 3：Saving Money is a Good HabitI think saving money is a good habit. Because saving money can make you learn how to use less money to buy more things. Saving money can make you become a rich man.If some thing happen one day, you must use some money to solve the problem, but nobody can lend to you the money. Your saving money can help solve the problem. Nowdays, some students use their parents money to buy a lot of unnessary things. Such as, Some students change their mobil phone every month. Its not a good habit. Although their parents have a lot of money, they cant use money in that way. Its waste of money. If you save money as a habit. You can think carefully before you buy everything. “This thing is necessary for me? Can I buy the cheaper one?” All those questions can be asked by yourself. If you want to buy a very useful thing, but you dont have enough money, you can save money for it. After some time, you can buy it for your-self. Saving money is a good habit. It make you become rich. It make you learn how to use less money to buy more things.本卷得分8-9分。文章基本切题，结构基本正确。 但语言简单，重复动词，语法错误多。开始段没有引入主题，而是直接提出作者观点，太 突然。而且有许多非完整句。文章没有深度，思考肤浅。Sample 2: Saving money is a good habit The other day, I heard a conversation between a boy and a girl. “Why are you always lack of money? As far I know, your parents give you ample money for your daily life”. said the girl. “Yes, I always use tomorrows money today”. Said the boy. “Its a bad habit, and you should your money!” the girl shouted. This is a very common phenomenon among the university students. Owing to their argument, certainly, I am in favor of the girls view. What possibly contributes to the preference can be listed as follow. In the first place, money is very important for us. We use money buy food, buy clothes and so on. But, money is very precious, because its very hard to make money. So money should be used when its necessary. In the second place, there are so many poor children who quit school for lack of money in poor religion. So its very significant to save our money to help those poor children. And they are look forward to your help! The last but the least import