3个月扭亏为“赢”任务型写作速成兵法Lead-in Story telling (using the general words)Key words:point out phenomenon give a picture finally attitude The article _ - playing truancy (逃学）-among students.It also _ of forms truancy takes _ ,it tells the _ on the part of school. points out a phenomenongives us a picture Finally attitudeSimilar story Have you ever played truancy? Would you please share with us one of your experiences?How did you feel at that time?Why did you play truancy?What were you afraid of?What do you think of it ?Warming -up07 年读写任务考情报告一、定义通过阅读所给材料的有关信息，进而对此信息进行加工， 并结合平时积累的相关信息知识。按照任务要求谋篇布局， 完成指定的写作任务。旨在考查学生“用英语获取、处理信 息、传达信息的能力、分析问题、解决问题的能力以及用英 语进行思维和表达的能力”，即“综合语言运用能力”。 二、要求 1. 客观、准确、全面地转述所给材料的观点。 2. 能对所给材料的观点做出判断（表明立场） 3. 能提出自己的观点并加以论证。 4. 文章字数控制在150词左右。（不限定句子的数量） 评分标准1. 概括的准确性语言简洁明了，能客观、准确、全面地转述所给文字 材料。 2. 语言的规范性语言合乎语法，地道自然。（无中国式语 ）3. 内容的合适性选材必需切题；内容符合写作要求；论据能证点 4. 篇章的连贯性文章的主题（一个）要明确且贯穿全文；层次分明有条理； 衔接过渡自然。解题思路（步骤）一.明确任务“树 靶子” 任务一： 概括短文的内容要点。 任务二：发表你的看法。 二、审读所给的阅读材料并整理其思路。 （a）叙事性文章/说明文找关键词；找全文或段落的主题句（b）议论文论点论据结论How to summarize a passage: （Choose the proper skill） Skill1: Omit (省略) the details Skill2: Omit the repetitions Skill3: Omit the examples Skill4: Use general(概括性) words instead of specific(具体的) words Skill5: Use the shortest possible transitions (but, then, thus, yet, for) Skill6: Put the main points of a dialogue in indirect speech What should you pay attention to when writing a summary?1. Mainly use the words and phrases in the original passage. Do not include your own opinion, but be sure to use our own words.(主要引 用原文的词句,不能添加自己的见解，但是要用自己的 语言概括） 2. Write it in the third person .（第三人称）suggestionsYou may begin like these:The passage is about The writer tells us about The story is about The author tells us that如果给的阅读材料是一个故事，应该用最简练的语言来说明故 事讲述了什么，不能拖泥带水，而且最好讲述该故事给你的启 示或其中的一个道理。 如果是说明性或描述性短文,你就必须用概括的文字来说 明某种现象。 如果是议论文的阅读短文,则要尽可能客观简要地转述 阅读材料的观点。 第二部分写作思路勾勒如下：1.提出观点 2.事实论证:简单叙述一次逃学的经历说说当初的动机事情的结果 3.结论:谈谈现在的感受与态度在“写作内容”框架的引导下完成写作提出自己的观点并加以举例论证承上启下的句子： There is an experience about playing truancy.The feeling of playing truancy is really bad. Take me for an example. I played truancy once, too. As far as I am concerned, I have a similar experience in my primary school. I have such a similar experience.I also played truancy with my friend.I have a similar experience to this.I also have a similar experience.Have you ever played truancy?事实论证:I must say that sometimes I cut school. Would you please share with us one of your experiences?Only last Friday, I missed two English classes on purpose and got home. As my parents are at their work places at noon, I enjoyed myself watching TV.How did you feel at that time? I felt really cool to think that I was alone having a free time while the other poor children were learning the boring English. Why did you play truancy?Why play truancy? School work sometimes is really two much and you want to get it off your mind.What were you afraid of?Im afraid when teachers and my parents find out, I will be in trouble.What do you think of it ? Maybe I should kick off this habit soon.The feeling of playing truancy is really bad. I must admit that I do cut school once in a while. Only last Friend, I missed two English classes on purpose and went home without telling anyone. With my parents away， I enjoyed myself watching TV. I felt really cool having a free time alone while the other poor children were learning the boring English classes. Why play truancy? School work sometimes is really two much and I want to get it off your mind. Im worried about my school work. Maybe I should kick off this habit soon.一是修改文法方面的问题，包括用词时态等方面的 错误等 二是检查逻辑关系，看前后观点是否一致 三是使用一些较为高级的句型，如非谓语结构 With 短语结构倒装句型恰当的连接词动词词 组等叙述类文章写作模板：1. 标题2. 概括关于所读的短文的梗概(约 30词)3. 过渡句4. 记叙文 (关于同一主题的) 按题目内容要求5. 结束语点题The whole story Why Cut School? This article points out a common phenomenon - playing truancy - among students. It also gives us a picture of the forms truancy takes. Finally, it tells the attitude on the part of the schools. ( 33 words) The feeling of playing truancy is really bad. I must admit that I do cut school once in a while. Only last Friday, I missed two English classes on purpose and went home without telling anyone. With my parents away， I enjoyed myself watching TV.I felt really cool having a free time alone while the other poor children were learning the boring English classes. Why play truancy? School work sometimes is really too much and I want to get it off my mind. Besides，that English teacher of ours is really too hard on us and hardly any of us likes his class. Of course, when my teachers and my parents find out, I will be in trouble. Im worried about my school work, too. Maybe I should kick off this habit soon. (121 words)建议学生注意的问题1.单词的拼写；动词的过去式、过去分 词的拼写。2. 时态的运用。3. 人称的一致。（议